Very excellant.

This is the most beautiful, accurate, well-written story I have EVER in three years of reading from this website come accross. AMAZING job and please try to continue. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! You are an inspirational writer!

Sincerely,
Melissa

carla elliott? this should have clicked sooner... is there a connection to carla of burn notice or is it just a coincidence?

thats okay lol we all have times when we know its going to take a while to write! it was excellant though i loved it!!

Very nice chapter! Hope the muse comes back!

Well I hope you don't give up. I'm certainly not giving up on mine (okay so deleting them didn't help but they will be finished!)

Excellent work! Come back to it when you can think about it again. Tends to happen at the oddest moments.

I just found thisand it is very good. Is it over? Will there be more? Please?

Ohh, It is so sad. Í´m really about to cry :( :(
But I don´t, because I know they´re still alive haha :) :)
Hope the next chapter will be about Jenny and Gibbs xD xD
x
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Ok...second time reading it and AGAIN...tears!

Love it poppet!

Whats the "cricket in the bedroom" idea then? Tell me tell me tell me!

Love you too angel!

V!
xox

A very, very sad chapter.

Sniff

Good one, though.
Well done!

That was too intense. Amazing but it made me cry all over again...Great job and I cant wait for more, but Jibbs would be loved after this chapter...And poor Abby, she needs Gibbs. And Ziva...I hope everything works out. Update soon!

I like it so far update

No you're not allowed to stop writing.

That was beautiful. I mean I'm sobbing but it was still beautiful! Well done my friend! Well done indeed! I hope they can tell the team soon!

It's nice (not nice nice, but you hopefully understand what I mean) to see everyone's thoughts at the funeral. Very depressing, but nice. Excellent chapter!

Hey!
great story. I would have loved it that way.
Can wait to read more!


schöne Grüße aus Berlin xD