 crystalwolfberri 2009-09-07 . chapter 1wow, who knew what a little (cute) puppy could do for Klavier? hehe, too cute. (: |
 pisceanchic101 2009-07-30 . chapter 1How sweet! And cute! Nice job! :) |
 lildaemon 2009-02-05 . chapter 1I really like your portrayl of Ema - how she's completely indifferent to Klavier's charms; that's definitely the way it should be! Awesome fic! |
 kaleidostarmoon 2008-08-06 . chapter 1OH. SO. CUTE! |
 gyaku-tard 2008-07-21 . chapter 1aww. This was really cute. I enjoyed it alot^-^ |
 Fawn 2008-07-20 . chapter 1 Oh... Nice. I like it. It would take forever to get her to warm up to him, wouldn't it... (Here's for the beeting pool that Klavier's next step is buying a dog.) Well done with keeping them in character. |
 Concetta (too lazy too log-in) 2008-07-19 . chapter 1 This was a really well written one-shot. It was sweet, too! I'm gonna check out your other stories!
Ciao! |
 Neko Ryou 2008-07-18 . chapter 1aw this is such a cute story x3 |
 ami 2008-07-18 . chapter 1 very cute. I hope you write more with this couple. There are so few GOOD fics with Ema and Klavier, its kinda depressing.
but your fics have made my day! Thanks! |
 ritachi 2008-07-17 . chapter 1Hmm, nice sweet, short tale. Although I'm not a fan, it's not like I dislike them together. As long as it's written well and entertains well, then I think the story is very good. The writing, though simple, suits the simple plot. Everything is in good, simple fun. The flow and balance of the story is very well contained.
This story actually reminds me of this Japanese web doujinshi I read about how Ema is coming back from work eating a bag of Snackoos and then treats the dog like how you wrote it. And she smiles at the end with Klavier "swooned".
The little statement about Ema giving Phoenix a huge smile reminds of the another web comic. ^^; I'm not accusing you or anything, but it seems familiar, that's all. Sweet, simple entertainment.
Good work overall. |
 Fire Emblem MewMew 2008-07-17 . chapter 1Really nice, I loved it :) there were a few typos and missing commas but nothing too bad. could you possibly give me a link to the fanart you mentioned? I would love to see it! :) |