That's just too cute.

At the end too many lines are starting with 'Calleigh'.

Awwe; You captured well how some women can still feel pretty messed up even after the first three months.

Awwe. That's just too cute.

Good ending line here.

This is a quite long chapter. I just wish you had made your paragraphs longer.

It is really amazing how you can think of different names for the OCs every time. I often, too often end up using the same.

Your punctuation is quite bad in this chapter. Exclamation marks and commas are missing occasionally.

Longer paragraphs.

Again a very good ending line here.

This is a very good chapter.

Good chapter.

Better descriptions.

Of course she wants him to stay...

Longer paragraphs. More descriptions.