3 awwwww. Cute. lol but if i was Ran i would've never taken that pill

Good Fanfic, Dramatic, some action, and good grammar.

Amazing. The story line was... predictable, I guess, but what else can you make from Dectective Conan fanfic? No, what makes this fanfiction incredibly good is the rich vocabulary it has, the way the author describes the feelings each character has at every moment, and the knowledge that person has shown in various themes.

The only thing I didn't like about this (Come on, nothing is perfect, I mean, this little fanfic is close to perfection, but not quite) was the 'dreaming' part. I mean, it was sweet and everything, but it was just unrealistic. The story could have perfectly survived without it, putting the explanations and kisses somewhere else. The drug makes you shrink, not have schizophrenic illusions about double personality.

Other than that, it was perfect.

I rather enjoyed it. Sure Ai was OOC but still the story was sweet and the ending was cute.

Hey, I find that I actually like the story. When Ai gave the drug to Ran I was thinking "Oh, boy..." and thought the story was going down the drain. But now I feel lke going "Wohoo! yay, now I get to see Shinichi and Ran together in grade school!" And a very good interpretion of Ai. It is different than the usual. Good job!

Oh, and now she knows...

I love this story. Ran choosing to join Shinichi in his predicament helps things so much (well... In regards of feelings anyway...).

That was a really good idea, plus written with so much skill ...!

8D All the best !

dude, this is the best story ever! even though its only 2 chapters, but STILL! i loved it!

It is an interessting concept for the story to go but yet I have to thing this was the most stupid decision ANYONE could ever make. What, exchanging speed, strength, technique, credibility, adult rights, normal live, family happiness for the body of an eight year old which offers absolutely nothing but restrictions and the chance to hold Conan without looking like a pedophile. Not exactly a fair trade.

This is the first time I disliked Ai, I mean that was both incredibly selfish but at the same time incredibly stupid of her. Before she had an adult who was a karate master on her side, now she has another 8 year old who is probably going to be more of a hindrance

Your probably going to hate me for giving such a crappy reveiw, but in all honesty I cried well reading this.

It was beautifully written and I'd be driven insane if you DARED to change anything.

I really wouldn't mind seeing how Ran... I mean Rin Himitsu's dad reacted. But you left that up to the readers.

Thank you for writing such a touching story.

Fantastic! I personally believe the two teenagers that the woman dodged which caused her to bump into Ran were Kaito and Aoko!

This story is very well done, and I like how in this one, you shift the POV instead of having it center around Shinichi like in the other fic. It feels like you really thought it through, and the plot makes a good deal of sense, and feels extremely unique. I do like the resolution of the plot and ho things work out. Definately the best Detective Conan fic I've read in a long time. 10/10

This story is just so... so X3!kyaa!

Hi! Hate to burst you're bubble, and I know this is fanfiction, but I'm a sucker for ff authors who stick as close to the original story as possible. If Ai really had extra pills, she wouldn't give one to Ran. Instead, she would try to make a cure using the ingrdients and they would no longer be in that mess.

Remember when Agasa told Conan at the beginning that he couldn't make a cure even though he was a genius because he didn't have a sample? Well, the story you made clashes with that.

Aw! your story made my day! it's so cute!