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Reviews For: A Lack of Color

AnnaMollyPR
2008-09-05
ch 2,
abusewow really great story..i'm REALLY LOVIN' the volchok/marissa pairing..i'm reading for them but the entire story is well written so update soon and keep up the good work
angeluhhh
2008-08-05
ch 2,
abuseomg I LOVE the Volchok/Marissa! plz continue! and can u put more V/M :)
can't wait for next chpt
k
2008-08-05
ch 2, anon.
abuseI just read the two chapters and I really liked it. I don't usually go for stories with that many characters but it's nice how you're finding a way to make every story worth it. I'm not so sure about Zach being in this, but I'll keep reading to see where you take it. Nice job
boiseabram
2008-08-05
ch 2,
abuseI'm so excited that Volchok is in this story! He's not in many, and if he is, he's naturally the baddie. I'm really reading to find out what happens between him and Marissa, but the writing overall is excellent. I love how descriptive you are in the actual ER! I hope you keep writing, I'll be waiting to read!
krisz
2008-07-21
ch 1,
abuseI am enjoying this concept. I have watched ER for years.

Love Ryan as Carter and Taylor as Abby. Abby is one of my favorites on ER. So I love that you have Ryan and Taylor playing their parts. I was kinda surprised though that they are each with Hess and Theresa. Can we do something about that? LOL.

I think you should let Marissa live and pair her up with Volchuk. Even though I am not a big M fan...I did like her with Volchuk.

Looking forward to more.
whitelilly0989
2008-07-18
ch 1,
abuseOk, so I'm an ER fan... I've watched all seasons, from beginning to end (although obviously there are stuff that escape my mind lol) but seriously! I just loved this!

Taylor has an Abby vibe, plus she's going to be a med-student! How awesome! Ryan strikes me as Carter, and let me tell you, I was shocked that he's married to Theresa and that Taylor's dating Hess... (that one's creepy lol)...

Summer makes one kick ** surgeon! I loved it, and Seth being the one welcomed to the ER (when Ryan was the one welcomed to OC in the show) was very clever.

And finally... Marissa is Carol to me lol. Don't kill her... it would make sense if you do something like Doug/Carol with Volchok and Marissa. I don't think you should kil her at all!

I'm interested to see how one of my fave couples (RT) makes it through a divorce and finally they end up together lol... This fic has potential and so does your writing so please, keep up the good work and update this ASAP!

Oh! And we need to see Holly! lol... Luke's the only lonely boy! lol.

Shar
xoxoxox
Taylorforever
2008-07-18
ch 1,
abuseHi. nice beginning for a story. You are free to go in any direction you want to. I would let Marissa live although I don`t like her. But she`ll be good for the story. I like that Volchok is involved. Really interesting is the Seth/Ryan plot. And of course I hope for Taylor and Ryan! So go on please.
Taylorforever
Yarrie
2008-07-18
ch 1,
abuseGood start! Really funny how Ryan is Dr. Green and Seth is Carter... Good Job! I also love ER so I'm definately looking forward to the next chapter...
QuieraStrawberry9
2008-07-17
ch 1,
abuselol i like the combo..very much like the pilot of ER.. i actually don't like marissa..so if she lives or dies it's fine with me.. a marissa/volchok would be interesting.. update soon :)
breathe-in3
2008-07-17
ch 1,
abusethis is really good. I loved the Ryan/Taylor moments and I like
Volchok in this, he's less violent(lol). This was a really great
start and I can't wait to see where you go with the story line.
Also I think Marissa to stay, and her and Volchok would be great
together. I hope you update again!
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