Fucking awesome, man! Apart from spelling mistakes and mis-placed words this is amazing! Lovely description and emotive language.

Well Done!

Great writing. I love it!

well written. i really enjoyed it. i'd really like to praise your style of writing; very descriptive, you don't miss a single detail. although i would've liked Marlena to live. ;P but seriously, awesome story. keep up the good work!

Keep going!

This was a great story, I loved the emotions, the thoughts and the description that you put in this story.

I was meant to read just one chapter but was hooked and couldn't help but adds this to my story alert - :D thanks for finishing the story.

Farah.

This is an amazing story, I am hooked. I was only going to read one chapter but I just couldn't stop!

Your writing is really creative and full of description. I love the thoughts and the emotions that you have put into this story.

Keep up the great work!

Farah.

I love it so far, update soon!

You done good, kid.

Awesome story so far, JHF. :D

I love this chapter, especially how everyone's emotions are described. Poor Marlena though :(. Anyway update soon!

I love this chapter, especially how you managed to fit Jason into the story. Poor Marlena though, I always hated it when she died. Can't wait to read more!

I really like this story, especially because Jason is in it. Very creative. Update soon please!

Great start, can't wait to read more