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Reviews for: 7 Snogs: Soujirou and Kanata
Akai-Kurenai
2008-08-26 . chapter 1
Rofl, this story explains SO much about Kanata...

I never drank milk when I was younger, too. That's probably why I'm only 5 feet tall.

At least I drink milk with MY chocolate chip cookies! Well, sometimes!

The story was very cute, and the ending with that scary senior citizen was hilarious. Thanks for the story!

By the way, according to you, you have to love me to death now. xD

Just kidding.
Catland Creator
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
I know how she feels- just the smell of milk makes me nauseous. Tasting it- the table just, you know, changes color.
moomala
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
aw. :D

That was the definition of adorable.

I'll go edit wikipedia.
weluvgirlswithglasses
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
That was SO CUTE! Oh man, usually Lucky Star romance is so hard to do, but you did it beautifully. And with a sparcely seen couple, too. Good job!

There were times when Soujirou seemed a little too "normal", but those were quickly dismissed by consistent moments of weirdness. The kidnapper thing was great, and I could totally see it happening to them. I like how you gave them such a playful relationship. The way you incorporated milk-hate into an explanation for Kanata's height was also very clever. I thought that the confession was a little too abrupt at first, but you shot that criticism down with a twist. Nice.

Summing up, this was a fun, clever, and very very cute story. I hope that you write more in the future.
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