I loved this story!! Suspenseful and shows a lot of caring between the group. Great job!! =D

8/10 cuz der was parts i didnt like, cuz of not enough details or peoples reactions but over all really good ^^ i enjoyed *bows* thank you 4 dis story

Cole xoxo

I dont normaly send reviewa but hell that was really good! nice work ^^

It was short, but good enough.

This was a good first chapter. There were grammatical errors.

a review you want, a review you'll get. i greatly enjoyed the whole sudden-deep-trouble-in-the-middle-of-a-fight thing, but the whole...thing...at the end seems like a little bit of a letdown. perhaps a little more drama instead of just...letting the cat out of the bag.

I like the ending of this - it was sweet and very suspensy, it was great!

omgs i luved the ending! i think it turned out really really good ^^

~Sayo-san^^

pretty good job. Seems there was a lot more build up and a lot less more decline action. Plus, I was expecting more chapters... like, psycho babble with Kaoru being traumatized and backgrounds for the OCs and Hikaru being way more angsty and mysterious about loving his brother... The first two chapters were great! but its sad that Kyouya never even made a prominent show in the third chapter... and the description of the roller coaster? Didn't get that at all...
even if it took a lot of time, I feel the third chapter was a definite let-down. :( The story had real potential! I really liked it. I think you could have done a much MUCH better job if you took the time.
oh well. Good luck in the future~ ^^

i luv it ^-^ you really should update though...cuz it would be really good...plus i want to see if kaoru is okay..^-^

This is great! Is it too late to vote for lemon? If not, *raises hand* lemon!
Anywho, update soon! I want to see where this will go!
P.S. 100,0,0? Why? That's lots! xD I read it like "one hundred million...I would like that..." xD *ahem*
Update!

don't worry. i don't eat ppl. plz just continue as soon as possible before i shoot myself! i must read more! *eye twiches* heh, heh, heh...sorry about that. i love this story so frickin' much!

PLEASE I`M DYING HERE! MAKE A NEW CHAPTER SOON!...exactly why is this story labeled M??
There isn`t so much brutal scenes...please update soon I will be grateful ^^

NUU I DONT LIKE CLIFFHANGERS!! UPDATE QUICK! D: D: D: D:! But I like this story, it's got me hooked, POOR KYOUYA!! NU!! T.T like I asked earlier, Update soon :3

well since you asked I won't eat you but I will say I like this story and I'm REALLY hoping that you update sorta soon (please? i swear, I won't eat you then; I'll be good) oh and by the way I'm going to guess the reason he's avoiding him is cuz he's in love with him?; right?