that was good loved it

This is awesome! I can see it happening so easily. Great job!

Adorable! I don't if it's because I remember being the oldest sibling on car trips but I can totally picture this. Poor Charlie, I don't think any kid is good at the "quiet game" as my parents called it.

Aww, oh. Oh, so cute _

Brother love for the win!

OH! This was so sweet! I want more! I love stories about the boys when they were, well boys! I love to see what they might have gone through good and bad! I hope there is a possibility of more like this! Thank you so much for sharing!

Charlie scowled. "Mommy, Don's pinching me."

"He keeps squirming!"

"Both of you sit still," Mom ordered. "What's next, He's breathing my air?"

I am sad to say (consdiering we're in high school) my sisters and I had this very same argument in our pool last week, which culminated in us usig pool toys to split it in half, Sam and I on one side, Britty on the other. And, whenever we got near the other's side of the noodle/raft wall the other would be all like 'you're breathing my air.'

Anyway, I absolutely loved the banter between the brothers, the ending was absolutely adorable, I'm glad Don let Charlie talk. This is one of the best little!Epps fics I've ever read.

Awesome story. Nice look at the littlier Eppes Brothers.

This was so hilarious! I hope you write more about this trip.

"Yeah, it works for drops of spit and bits of lungs and germs too,"Charlie said.

"Blech!" Don clamped his hands over his mouth and nose. "You mean I'm actually breathing bits of Charlie? That's unbelievably gross."

LOL! I'm so glad I wasn't drinking right then!