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| comedowntome. 2008-10-08 ch 30, | abusei lovee this story. but sometimes i want to hit alex over the head with a bat for being so stupid. :) pms... |
| JG2007 2008-10-07 ch 30, | abusewow a lot of emotion in this chapter. i loved it. the last scene was hot. i wonder what the gift was?? great job. can't wait for more. |
| ChiliBean 2008-10-07 ch 30, | abuseI love drama drama drama and finally the happy end,aw cute :) great Job,please update soon and i hope you write a long chapter as before ;) |
| orgy123 2008-10-06 ch 30, | abuseWOW! i loved the ending and i love you too alex and marissa..but i wonder what alex asked ingrid... and i hope that alex and marissa stop fighting...even though i'm guessing theres more drama, but please keep posting cause i was missing your story |
| WonderousPlaceForAnEcho 2008-10-06 ch 30, | abuseThat was sweet, though you had a wave of emotions going on in there. I thought...Marissa shouldn't drink-bad idea. As Buffy states-Beer bad. though she wasn't drinking beer. I have a feeling that Alex was in an abusive relationship before and that's why she wanted to leave Marissa, but seriously...Marissa shouldn't have hit her. Violence makes me cringe and the idea of it...if I ever saw that on the show I would probably be sick. Anyways that was intense. I would do the same in Alex's position. I think it was sweet though that she stayed and Marissa was able to see vulnerability/concern and consideration in her. I think and these are just random ideas-Alex either had Indrid seem like she cheated on Marissa with her or they did some sort of business deal with modeling or it was a plan to just make Marissa jealous, but I don't think Alex is that cruel or vindictive. I think Alex is well aware she's in love with Marissa and she wants to make her happy. But I think Alex needs to tell Marissa to Never hit her again. That's wrong on many levels. I hope to see Alex be more honest with Marissa and vice versa. I really like this story even though it has its melodramatic moments, its sweet and I think a lot of personality is implied. I'm glad Alex was so sweet, I always thought she was willing to do whatever Marissa asked her to and was patient with her, you tapped into that well I think. |
| WhiteDude 2008-10-05 ch 30, | abuseNO!! gosh darn it! i should've known it was a dream!! ~sigh~ haha! wait a minute!! omg!! they kissed!! omg! finally!!that was an awesome upate! i wonder what the gift was though?? i totally enjoyed that update! ur such an awesome writer! (lol srry i was typing this while i was reading it!!) |
| orgy123 2008-09-28 ch 29, | abuseloved loved loved the update haha alex lost the bet cause she kissed marissa and i can sense some drama coming if alex doesn't tell marissa about her other ex girlfriend...anywaz keep posting :)...oh and I'm sorry about your throat i hope you get well soon!! |
| JG2007 2008-09-28 ch 29, | abusewow great chapter!! yay they finally kissed again. can't wait for more!! |
| bogvampire21 2008-09-27 ch 29, | abuseOMG continue plz and what a tease seriously |
| orgy123 2008-09-18 ch 28, | abuseloved the update and i must say that I'm feeling what marissa is feeling when girls come on to alex its just frustrating...but i love marissa for it and i want a present from alex to... aneywas pot more and maybe have a jealous alex too because who wouldn want to have a jealous alex anyways please post soon :) |
| ChiliBean 2008-09-18 ch 28, | abuseyeah,thanks for updating,I think the same,Ingird is a ugly name :D Bring more of Alex jealousy,Marissa ist also HOT ;) |
| WonderousPlaceForAnEcho 2008-09-17 ch 28, | abuseInteresting. I like how Marissa is trying to control her emotions but come on, Alex should be smarter than that and not do what a "fan" insists. Also Jodie is amusing. Aside from that I'm not a fan of Ingrid, I don't even like her name. |
| WhiteDude 2008-09-17 ch 28, | abuseyay an update! that was such a cute chapter!! i wonder who the girl alex loved before? hm...i wonder what alex is going to give ingrid? i have a feeling that it has something to do with marissa too?!?! can't wait for the next update! |
| JG2007 2008-09-14 ch 27, | abusemarissa is getting better and better at tempting alex. the whole alex being wet part was really funny. great update. can't wait for more! |
| orgy123 2008-09-07 ch 26, | abusei missed you and your story I mean its been days of...torture, but i loved the update... and alex should defiantly tell her i mean they are girlfriends and she does feel something for marissa so why not tell her |