lol a bear comes out of nowhere haha

omg lol!!
the mythbusters!! haha

LOL, Membrane at the end…Too funny!

What I loved about this story is that you managed to improve Gaz’s character without making her wildly OOC. The key element that made it work was Tak tormenting Gaz. It was the only way to make Gaz feel what she did to Dib.

I wouldn’t have blamed Dib at all if he decided not to reverse the spell.

So Tak got revenge solely on the person who was the least responsible for ruining her plan. I’m sensing a parallel here.

Wow, is Gaz’s cold, hard heart melting? I sure hope she starts treating Dib like a human being now!

Wow, Gaz actually learned a lesson somewhat. Hopefully she changes even more. Again, thanks a ton for doing my request. I'm glad that it was fun for you.

This was a nice story. It was funny and neat. I liked it.

Wow, you got this up fast- but it was a short epilogue, so that makes sense.
It's good to see that Gaz has learned a little from this experience. She hasn't improved much, but it's something. I also liked the last line. Very funny.
Keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

A baby ate half a pizza? I can’t even eat that much in one sitting!

Ha, Gaz is starting to appreciate Dib a little now that she’s had a taste of petty revenge.

Dib's probably barricaded himself in his room, hasn't he? We as the audience may know that Gaz is a changed person now that she's back to normal, but HE doesn't know that.
Can't wait to see how you wrap this up- especially since you told me you'd be doing my request next.
Keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Tak really deserves to be punished for this. Yeah, Gaz needs to learn a lesson, but Tak and Gaz have some similarities.

This was a really nice chapter. Love how now they are see the physical v. emotional age with Membrane and such.

I don’t know if you’ve ever seen Fairly Oddparents, but Tak reminds me of Vicky in this story.

The diaper question I had is sort of addressed in this chapter, but for some reason Gaz had a stronger reaction to Tak leaving the bathroom door open than going poopy in her pants.

I almost feel sorry for Gaz until I remember that she brought this on herself. And also that she would probably treat babies the same way if she were still older.

Another nice chapter. I like how it is going and your idea here.

Well, Gaz seems to be changing a little, since she finds Dib "tolerable". Should be interesting to see if that affects her getting back to normal.
Keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Gaz is changing. Never thought I would see this day! WOOT! TIME TO PARTY! You really should write more! Tis an awesome story!
Wolf =3