love

I like your story. I love the couples you chose. hop you continue umbrella twist and this story soon too.

i like this i know you havent updated in a while but please update soon

LOVE IT! It's really great, can't wait to see which future couple gets mentioned next! :D

So Funny! Hope you update soon!

lol!
great job dude or dudette

awesome update soon!

Hey! I doun't havea gluttered mind! Okay, maybe I do. Great chapter! Update soon, okay?

Looks like Wally isn't the only one to be subjected to teasing this time...

And I have a feeling that Wally will REALLY go off the deep end if this continues.

Great that you updated. Hope to see more.

OMG LOL ROTFLMAO

Priceless and Abby was great in this chapter

Good job. I had this story on alert, and the fake chapter...sort of confused me. I tried clicking on the link again and again every few hours. But the wait was worth it.

See this quote? '“You know, we’re having meatball subs” she added with a wink.'

I loved that quote.

Good job.

Heh, teasing Wally and getting away with it, that is certanly fun.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

lol They're so funny! Kuki, I love her naiveness.

WOW! YOU UPDATED!
I love Kuki's naivety ... she should get some of it, and Wally has been amazingly well behaved ... haha "waht action could he have get if he was all night wit me on bed?" that was hylarious
please update soon

Hoagie is going to lose some teeth if he keeps it up...