 Oo I'm scared 2/5/10 . chapter 4 Omfg why why did you make a whole series on the freakeshly
Bella *dies* |
 Blacker Side of the Shadows 1/1/10 . chapter 3i can't stop reading this perverted ess...if you resurrect it, make it more descriptive |
 DragonLord Seth 10/30/09 . chapter 2id keep reading, but its just too crazy, if its not done yet, make it to where bella's ditto changes felix back to a dude |
 DragonLord Seth 10/30/09 . chapter 1shit, talk about a sore loser, i played this guy in platinum once, he had glitched pokemon, but didnt know how to use them, i beat him, and he accused ME of cheating, he gave me hall about it, but hes not as sore of a loser as she was |
 naruto1222 10/25/09 . chapter 2dear felix its me again. my names aaron btw anyways i showed this story to my friend and he said u have a really f* up mind. but i said he has a very colorful mind
,aaron |
 aaron 5/1/09 . chapter 3 hi im new to this site and my friend sydney told me to check your stories out. and i like em. please make more.
p.s i was wondering if it would be all right to show these to my uncle who is a publisher and can probably get you alot of money.
email me with the answer
my email address is please no spam or annoying messages about viagra.
hope to here from you soon and remember big bucks!
if you say yes
your friend, aaron |
 knipester 4/6/09 . chapter 3i realy like it now |
 Espeon of Darkness 3/1/09 . chapter 3well that was a good chapter, please update soon.
The Cerebal Assassin Has Spoken |
 Thorn In Your Side 2/26/09 . chapter 3...
You sick little weirdo.
I LOVED IT.
8D You forgot to call yourself Lixxy, though. |
 Plasmavores Jin-Ichi 2/26/09 . chapter 3 This is like the game Kane&Lynch! Just with raping instead of classic murders... |
 Drogan44 12/25/08 . chapter 2Woah... |
 Anon 7/26/08 . chapter 1 -cracking up- Oh man. You seriously fail at life. Honestly, dude? Go get some counseling. |
 Cricket-The-Duck 7/22/08 . chapter 2Whoa...That IS twisted revenge!
Nice job Felix! Seriously...Wow.
You should write more of this shit! It's the dogs bollocks! :) |
 knipester 7/18/08 . chapter 1i liked it but i think mayb u should be a little less violent |
 Mr.GuyOfDarkness 7/18/08 . chapter 1I like it. Short but sweet, and just the right amount of gore and grossness. I do have a slight problem tough, u did rip off the last part of the story, where Felix was found and brought to a hospital, and had his/her memory erased by Poliwrath. That was all included in my story, but I'm sure that was the only way to go in this situation. But I definetly got to say, u need a sequel, cause u can't end it there and let Bella get away with it. I'm planning my chapter for Misty to get her revenge, so should Felix. Out of 10, I'd give it a 7.5. A little short, and I would have liked more gropping parts then choking. Still good job. Email me, if u have any further comments. |