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Oo I'm scared 2/5/10 . chapter 4
Omfg why why did you make a whole series on the freakeshly

Bella *dies*
Blacker Side of the Shadows 1/1/10 . chapter 3
i can't stop reading this perverted ess...if you resurrect it, make it more descriptive
DragonLord Seth 10/30/09 . chapter 2
id keep reading, but its just too crazy, if its not done yet, make it to where bella's ditto changes felix back to a dude
DragonLord Seth 10/30/09 . chapter 1
shit, talk about a sore loser, i played this guy in platinum once, he had glitched pokemon, but didnt know how to use them, i beat him, and he accused ME of cheating, he gave me hall about it, but hes not as sore of a loser as she was
naruto1222 10/25/09 . chapter 2
dear felix its me again. my names aaron btw anyways i showed this story to my friend and he said u have a really f* up mind. but i said he has a very colorful mind

,aaron
aaron 5/1/09 . chapter 3
hi im new to this site and my friend sydney told me to check your stories out. and i like em. please make more.

p.s i was wondering if it would be all right to show these to my uncle who is a publisher and can probably get you alot of money.

email me with the answer

my email address is please no spam or annoying messages about viagra.

hope to here from you soon and remember big bucks!

if you say yes

your friend, aaron
knipester 4/6/09 . chapter 3
i realy like it now
Espeon of Darkness 3/1/09 . chapter 3
well that was a good chapter, please update soon.

The Cerebal Assassin Has Spoken
Thorn In Your Side 2/26/09 . chapter 3
...

You sick little weirdo.

I LOVED IT.

8D You forgot to call yourself Lixxy, though.
Plasmavores Jin-Ichi 2/26/09 . chapter 3
This is like the game Kane&Lynch! Just with raping instead of classic murders...
Drogan44 12/25/08 . chapter 2
Woah...
Anon 7/26/08 . chapter 1
-cracking up- Oh man. You seriously fail at life. Honestly, dude? Go get some counseling.
Cricket-The-Duck 7/22/08 . chapter 2
Whoa...That IS twisted revenge!

Nice job Felix! Seriously...Wow.

You should write more of this shit! It's the dogs bollocks! :)
knipester 7/18/08 . chapter 1
i liked it but i think mayb u should be a little less violent
Mr.GuyOfDarkness 7/18/08 . chapter 1
I like it. Short but sweet, and just the right amount of gore and grossness. I do have a slight problem tough, u did rip off the last part of the story, where Felix was found and brought to a hospital, and had his/her memory erased by Poliwrath. That was all included in my story, but I'm sure that was the only way to go in this situation. But I definetly got to say, u need a sequel, cause u can't end it there and let Bella get away with it. I'm planning my chapter for Misty to get her revenge, so should Felix. Out of 10, I'd give it a 7.5. A little short, and I would have liked more gropping parts then choking. Still good job. Email me, if u have any further comments.
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