Reviews for Chance Encounter IV: Legacy of the Third Age

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SwordMasterZ 2008-08-18 ch 6,	abuseYou know I think the Cardinal is going to flip when he sees will and the other Balian look alikes. This could be fun.
willabeth0906 2008-08-16 ch 6,	abuseanother great chapter...hm...middle earth... can't wait until next friday...
milou8 2008-08-16 ch 6,	abuseI love the story untill now. I like Legolas taking charge for once as he is usually the one who follows the rest. I trust Balian will not talk about Middle Earth! When will the others find out Balian is in Avignon and not in Rome?
talking2myself 2008-08-15 ch 6,	abuseHmm... what does this cardinal know about Middle Earth? This could be trouble for Balian and the gang. Nice to know that they can't completely beat the spirit out of Balian. He handles every situation with honor grace. I quite like that about him and you write him very well! Please update soon!
queenofspades19 2008-08-15 ch 6,	abuseI enjoyed everything until you got to The Mage. And they merry band of miscreants are going the wrong way.
Sonjadore 2008-08-15 ch 6,	abuseHey, just jotting down a quick review before heading off to vacation! Ouch...poor Balian! And Barisian. Not everyone appreciates Legolas' blunt honesty. And how in censored did the cardinal find out about Middle Earth?! Anyways, enjoyed this as always, and I'm looking forward to reading more when I come back!
Calenlass Greenleaf1 2008-08-15 ch 6,	abuse//“Then what do you want with me?” asked Balian. None of this was making sense at all. The cardinal smiled and leaned in closer so that he could whisper into the younger man’s ear. “I want to talk to you about Middle Earth,” he said.// O.O blinks Well...that was very unexpected! Loved this chapter. Unfortunately, I won't be read/reviewing for about two weeks, because I'll be away until Sept. :( ~Cal
XinnLajgin 2008-08-15 ch 6,	abuseIt takes a lot for Balian to lose his temper, but right now I can't help but imagine Balian ripping that greedy bastard's spine out through his mouth and beating him with it till his fucking eyes pop out! Wow that's even graphic but what can I say?
Itar94 2008-08-15 ch 6,	abuse"“We go to Rome, as planned,” said Legolas. “We didn’t plan any of this,” muttered Anna-Maria. “We were thrown headlong into it.”" Lol, it was one of teh best parts in this chapter. Keep the good work up! Can't wait for teh next update :D
mep13 2008-08-14 ch 5,	abusejaw drops DAMN! That was Good, No AWESOME! you have got to continue!! your style is great and i don't think you need any tips from me or anyone else. "Rock and the world rocks with you" ~Roxy, out
PrincessVictoriaAnnMacbeth 2008-08-10 ch 5,	abuseLike the update! Wonder how Phil's going to take seeing more than one Balian?
talking2myself 2008-08-09 ch 5,	abuseYou send Jack out on a rescue mission and he comes back with an entire army chasing after him. Typical. It was nice to see Jean-Pierre feeling some remorse about ditching Balian. I still like his character. Please update soon!
Calathiel of Mirkwood 2008-08-09 ch 5,	abuseHa! I love these guys! Sounds like Legolas, Will, Paris and the lot will have quite a bit of running to do. :) Excellent chapter as always!
Sonjadore 2008-08-08 ch 5,	abuseOoh...the tension builds... Well, I'm not to fond of the idea of becoming a screaming fangirl, so I'll try to be serious. Really enjoyed this chapter; 'specially the part when Achilles threw Jack on the horse. And while I'm at it (I know I say this a lot in other reviews, but it's very well-deserved), congratulations on keeping Jack in character, as he's pretty tricky to write. I would like to see a bit more of Balian in upcoming chapters, but I think that's my only suggestion. Aside from that, keep writing, and I look forward to the next update!
Ranchi Blade 2008-08-08 ch 5, anon.	abuseIm seeing Jack and Achilles beeing chased... and its a funny picture that is !

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