talk about a dun dun dun! can't wait to read the next!

Quote: Harry Potter, thanks to newly discovered relations, is considered to be an American citizen.


That's... not how it works.


Quote: Patronus Charm, an ability that was something of a rarity

It's a skill, Harry was able to teach it to everyone in the DA. It's not that rare obviously if anyone with a very happy memory can cast it.

Quote: , it would however blow the iron to pieces and leave said pieces as little more than heavily warded bits of scrap metal.

Bulls*it. What about unbreakability charms? Shurely wizards would make their walls immune to physical damage.


Quote: it was quicker to use a Zat then it was to cast a Stunning Charm

seventeen unconscious Aurors, courtesy of Zats

... ... What?

Quote: questioning under Veritaserum

I thought it was stated that they didn't use it because it could be resisted with occlumency and other kinds of magic.

Quote: we’ll just have to get you some CDs to try out as well.”

Sigh. Is there a point in this plotwise? Rhetorical question there.

Quote: “Abrumpo! Ledo! Foro!”

Quite possibly the worst way to describe a duel between wizards. Surely the duel between Dumbledore and Voldemort in OOTP was much more impressive. A wizard isn't supposed to simply be throwing curses at his opponent. Transfiguration, conjuration, animation, the very elements bend to their will in order to harm the other. Not one verbal incantation was used in that duel.

Quote: was that the feeling in his left arm cut off partway down his forearm

Phantom pain, you keep feeling as if an amputated limb was still there for years.

I didn't get far. Your spelling was checked, but the story was not proofread. You just have too many errors of grammar, like murder for murdered, health instead of healthy and too many other problems to enumerate. It reads like Filipino Harry Potter.

nice chapter

please update soon!

It has been over a month since the last time I read this and I have to say that it has just gotten better. This last chapter was quite good. It's good to see that although Harry is becoming hardend like he needs to he still seems to have quite a bit of morality left. Enough to keep him thus far as a Warrior/soldier instead of becoming a killer.

Wow. I was up so very late last night reading this story. I finally realized that I needed to go to bed, and with a major amount of reluctance, I left the last two chapters for today. Now, I am going to be bouncing and fidgeting until you post the next chapter.
You like those cliffhangers don't you. LoL
I love HP/SG1 crossovers so much, but this story is in a class all it's own. I love the way you have blended the two worlds so flawlessly. And without resorting to cliches. Way too many times have I come across Harry being a descendant of Ancients or a mixed up spell throwing Harry into a parallel universe. While I have read one from each of those that were very good, the cliche was still painful to read and accept. This was very refreshing and so enjoyable to read.
Even with blending the two fandoms and all the OCs being added, you have still managed to keep the characters fairly cannon. I love that you didn't change their personalities.
Since I was too busy wanting to get to the next chapter IMMEDIATELY, and couldn't even stop to review at the end of each chapter, I must say something now. I LOVE that you killed off Ron in such a spectacularly worthless way! I have always hated Ron. I don't care how someone writes them, Ron and Ginny ** me off. I actually like the other Weasleys, but have always hated the two youngest. And Hermione usually annoys me. So the way you have written them is an added bonus to a wonderful story.
I will be waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter. I can't wait.

and thus, shows the difference between Harry and Voldemort.

age of adulthood in UK: 16

Trying to inforce house-rules on a sixteen year old brit would be less than pointless, it would be spoiling for a fight..

very nice, and thank you for commiting to finish your story!

Harry hadn't even time to consider the effect of his actions until after the deed was already done... Another burden on his shoulders. He really needs a vacation.

Excellent insertion of Harry into the two episodes. Now, I guess Harry will have to deal with that crossing the line and doing what is needed that both Jack and Birch know. (However, I highly doubt they were teenagers when they started.)

I am rather surprised that Jack ok'ed this plan, especially given he was leery of even giving Harry a gun. Then again Jack must now live with what his decision will ultimately cost Harry.

Looking forward to more! Hope you have a happy Holiday Season Pottergate.

Very Interesting story.

Looking forward to the next bit.