I was a bit lost in the first chapter, were they making out? If they were, I'm dreadfully sorry for not paying attention. T_T

Hehe, anyway, these two pieces are, um, what you say, sexy. ;)
I rather like the teasing of the second chapter, especially incorporating food in there! :)

Thanks for writing!

This is absolutely beautiful; so well written, I could feel Wendy's shivers. Great job!

Damn, woman, you can write. You say so much in so little words. This was steamy, every bit swoon-worthy.

This is great!

This is pure rich fun, your writing is a delight for my senses, thank you again.

Love your Wendy/Hook stuff so much!

Lovely! No one writes Hook/Wendy like you do!

Absolutely smashing! That pomegranate bit did quite honestly take my breathe away. Such an appropriate comparison.

Oh my...

This is absolutely *smouldering*...

Lovely follow up to the other Hook/Wendy writings you have.
Nicely done!
Cheers!
Nytd

How enticing!

Do go on writing...you're quite good! :D

I am also one of those who read (and still reads) your old Hook/Wendy fic. This tiny morsel was certainly a delectable treat! The urgency of the situation was really well written in such a short fic.

I'm still glad this pairing inspires you every now and then. Will we perhaps see a continuation of the older fic in the future?

I really enjoyed the pacing of this piece. The urgency, haste, and torrential current of the scene were deeply intensified by artistic use of run-on sentence. A very tasty, little tid-bit, but not nearly enough!
I'm one of those people who still read your old Hook/Wendy fic and I for one am still hoping you will, at some point, continue that series.
please, please, please...

Whew! Short, yes—but who could take the heat, if it went longer? It's still surprising, to see Wendy in quite this light.

Making her lover tremble, and Wendy challenge him, works well to convey her grown-up boldness. I particularly liked the memory of eyes, emblem of her shift in perception.