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| sweetkia13 2008-08-04 ch 10,  | abuseLol I loved this story! Two things though. A lot not alot, and believing not beleiving. Still great story though |
| NightmareAngel365 2008-08-03 ch 10, | abuseLOL! "Chiro, give us some space!" That was great. XD I'm kinda sad it's over, but it was a cute ending. |
| ElasticPoodle 2008-08-03 ch 10, | abuseYAY! YAYAYAYAYAY! I love it! SPOVER FOREVER! ((sorry I didn't review sooner, I've been on holiday)) |
| Soul of Antauri 2008-08-03 ch 10, | abuseWow. That's very nice!! The ending seemed a little rushed and it would be interesting if you kept Nova as the queen a little while longer. I'm glad you finished, I was dying to read the ending. Always a dream... Stay Cool!:) |
| Miss Hal Gibson 2008-08-03 ch 10, | abuseLol, so it was all a dream...I wasn't expecting that...anyway that was great! |
| Demonata 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseMandarin's a creep! Puppet Side: Ya, just wait 'til I get my claws on- Me: please puppet, stop that, anyway UPDATE SOON |
| Soul of Antauri 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseI forgot about Gibson. Like you said in Chapter 8, Mandarin is a FREAK! Very nice chapter:). Stay Cool!!:) P.S. NOVA! |
| Miss Hal Gibson 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseNO! *picks tazer back up and shoves it down mandarins throat* Hm, I feel better now, and I want you to update soon! |
| NightmareAngel365 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuse*Spazzes out* Wait! Nova is evil?! Is she still in love with Sprx? That would be weird to be in love with the one you're trying to destroy. . . Oh well. Great chapter! |
| SkeletonSlayer13 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuse*takes out sword an chases Mandarin around* STOP BEING A CREEP YOU FUGLY MONKEY! LEAVE NOVA ALONE *continues to chase Mandarin with hate in my eyes Dawn: um *anime sweat drop* anyway, Update Soon *takes out mallet* GET BACK HERE YOU CREEP! *helps Skeleton Slayer to chase the creep outta the city |
| Soul of Antauri 2008-07-25 ch 8, | abuseHey, you do know you need SURGERY to get a tazer out compleately, right? No false flames today! What did Mandarin do? Dun, Dun, DUN! XD Stay Cool!:) |
| NightmareAngel365 2008-07-24 ch 8, | abuse0_o Does Mandarin like Nova? That would be scary . . . . |
| Miss Hal Gibson 2008-07-24 ch 8, | abuseGaah!*grabs tazer from your hand and zaps Mandarin, then throws a running hair dryer in a bathtub and also throws Mandarin in* Hah! That'll show him!*runs off* |
| Miss Hal Gibson 2008-07-22 ch 7, | abuseAH! Update soon! |
| Miss Hal Gibson 2008-07-22 ch 4, | abuseThat was great... |