Huh, very interesting. didnt ever read the archie comics, so these brief views into their ideas make me wish i did. XD

Oh wow! It's probably been ten years since i first read this story. And it's stuck with me all these years. And it's just as great as I remembered it being. I can't say enough about your charactarizations. I think you write the definitive Sniv. A lot of the scenes in this story are heartbreaking and you describe pain so well I often find myself cringing while I read. You are a truley talented writer. I look forward to rereading the next part.

What a strangely surreal story. Fun, though. I like how quickly it progressed. Snively certainly knows how to get the bitties.

Everyone is so horny! It's great.

Wow Shadic, what a helpful review. *rolls eyes*

OH! Gross! 9#1(4& #8!6! Jak: Did I just hear somebody cuss? (I am in a forest reading this on a laptop) Me (thinking): Oh, crap! He's gonna shoot me with that bazooka! (Starts running like hell) Jak: Gotcha! Oh wait, it's just Sally Acorn. KILL IT! Me: NO! NO! I'M NOT SALLY ACORN! MY NAME IS CARA AND I'M A HUMAN! Hey, you're pretty hot... Jak: You are too.

I read this a long time ago, but i never had a chance to review it.

So:

I thought this was one of your best.

There is so much emotion, and feeling with the way you write.

And it becomes very easy to feel sympathy for Snively.

Not as good as 'Barred Speech', but still an easy five star story.

A great story! Your writing style is very unique. Excellent work. You've also managed to give Snivley a heart, soul, and emotion. Bravo.

I didn't have the formatting problem. Anyway, this is a good story as is all yours, keep on writing em and I'll keep reading em.

Okay, MAJOR formatting problem here...I dunno if I'm the only one, but this story scrolled three times further across than my computer screen would go, and skipping across and back and down and across and back and down (you get the picture) really does ruin the flow of the story...but other than that a good story, though not as great as some of your others (but that might have something to do with the format thingy...)