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| AmbivalentAngyl 2008-09-01 ch 1,  | abuseReally adored this and you are have a wonderful way of ending things. I just have one question pertaining to what each lost. Who lost what, i was confused. I think it was Hunny Mori Kyoya Kaoru and Hikaru but i wasn't sure. Thanks! |
| LadyCatriea 2008-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThat is a beautiful story. I almost cried in the end T.T Love it |
| SummerCherryBlossom 2008-08-15 ch 1, | abusethis is a really sweet story! i love it!! good job in describing everything. all in all awesome story! |
| idioticsmile 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseaw..='] |
| DevilHeart13 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was an awesome little story, even if it was Tamaki/Haruhi. |
| ninaa 2008-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww! i love it! :D TT.TT so sad though! >.> ;_; looking forward to all of your other work. |
| teeenaaa 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI want Kyouya's love too =P This was an incredibly sweet story, and I love how you've tied up the whole story with the prompt of 'flowers', you've done an amazing job on that =] The flowers you've chosen all befit their corresponding Hosts perfectly - affectionate pink roses from Kaoru, sad but beautiful forget-me-nots from Hikaru, prim and cool white roses from Kyouya, cheerful, dependable daisies from Hunny, and subtly fragrant lilies from Mori - each of these seem to symbolise the characters of the Hosts and the nature of their feelings for Haruhi. Not to mention the fact that the way you've described each of these is wonderfully fitting. And let's not forget Tamaki and his red roses =D I did notice a few mistakes/typos, but since it was a rush job, you've done remarkably well. Many thanks for such a sweet and enjoyable fic! =] |
| Dark-Hooded Eriol the Magic... 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseYour story was great. It had great pacing, great writing and a very great plot. The mysterious bridegroom was exciting. The characters were all perfect. You know them so well. I really enjoyed your story. Keep it up! |
| bringme2life 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS SO CUTE! IT WAS WRITTEN VERY WELL! IT WAS EXTRAORDINARY! I LUVED IT! |
| hitachiinAlways79 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's so sad! But yet so good! I almost cried. |
| falling.petals 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseAw! I loved loved loved the ending! It was definitely how I imagine the wedding, and her breaking the news to the others. "They were losing a friend, a soul mate, a girl they could’ve loved, a girl they did love, and the girl they would never give up." That was the sweetest (and a guessing game to match up who said who). However, I didn't understand the Kyoya encounter (much like Haruhi), the relevance af the thorns on the roses, and there a few spelling mistakes. But I'm really glad I read to the end, because it was ultimately fabulous. |
| Ayjah 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseYou would have to think it would be an unusual situation and she is not exactly miss observant when it comes to relationships... |
| ........... 2008-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo sad! So beautiful! So kawaii! |
| Dark Hope Assassin 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseOh my, a Tamaki/Haruhi piece from you, I am so very thrilled! :D You pulled it off amazingly well and I adored it. The anxiety, the angst, the everything--it was absolutely amazing! :D Thank you for a wonderful read once more. :> |