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Reviews for: The Box and First Impressions
harleyQdoll
2008-10-01 . chapter 2
awesome!
love it!
:D
WatchTheWorldBurn
2008-09-10 . chapter 2
I loved this fic! I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter! You're on my story alert list!

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princessebee
2008-07-26 . chapter 2
I thought this one did a very nice job of capturing the scope of Joker's world and how much has passed that Harley has not been involved in and how that would definitely make her feel so small and insignificant in comparison. It would be a very isolating experience.
I loved the phone call at the beginning in particular for the way it explored the oh so true dynamics between the trio as well.
princessebee
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
Lots of lovely, demented, twisted and sweet (in a sick way) elements to this story that paint a lovely picture of the perverse domesticity Joker and Harley enjoy together. Also very humorous, which is an element I always enjoy in your work since I am so dedicated to OMGDRAMA! I love reading lighter JxH stories that still capture the full essence of their complicated relationship and this is one of them. I like the subtle theme of this story - Harley gradually becoming more integrated into Joker's life, to the point he's sharing more and more with her.
If I have one consistent complaint with your work, it's that Joker's treatment of Harley is too consistent. He's pretty much always rough and rude and cruel even when they're having a good time, wheras canon shows he swings violently from cruelty to fawning, impatience to indulgence. For future work I'd really enjoy seeing more of that schizophrenic behaviour. You made the point in One Good Day, and I'd love to see you actually write some of it.
I also love that she had the fish done. So cute! She just knows how to make him happy. And I like how Joker's thought train is so inconsistent and all over the place and easily distracted. Makes me giggle!
laal ratty
2008-07-21 . chapter 2
Lol, I have to say that I have no idea who Jason is but I'm just read this after 7 months of Torchwood fics and so an apparent immortal who can't stay dead automatically made me think of Jack Harkness.

Fantastic and funny, as usual I loved the bit with the paint tins.
mr jokey joke-maker
2008-07-18 . chapter 2
I'm dying to hear about this fight, hm...
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