this is an interesting view on things! well written XD

I liked the plot, in fact the whole story. I think it's a good idea, what about continue it?... I'd like to know if Bulma says 'yes' to the poor Saiyan Prince.

cute story, hehe

Thats cool. I like what ifs.

hey this is actually really good even tho vegeta sounds kinna ooc...if its not done, please finish it?

please finish?

please finish?

I love this! This work it great, very original, and has a wonderful new, fresh look at how the characters could behave. (Did I mention that I've read nearly all your fics now and this is the last straw; you're going on my favorite authors list! And that's final!) I look forward to reading more of your creative work in the future.

Well, it was interesting. I liked how it portrayed the characters differently than most stories.

I thought it was very interesting.. no one ever seemed to point out that maybe it wasn't Bulma who was being the aggressive one. I was a little confused by the '' at first..and I didn't like it that it wasn't longer..but I must congradulate you on leaving me hungry for more.