Really lovely portrayal of how one moves on from first loves. Great use of Victorie's name!

YAY!! You're such a great poette (

I loved this, it was beautiful.
'First love means first loss, and needs no reasons' and 'Today, he kisses another’s lips' were my favourite lines I think, but the whole thing was great!

I'm going to read Hidden Shadows now :)

I loved this! I really like how you captured the sort of blinding, sometimes very passionate (in an innocent naive way) of first love. Very realistic, very sweetly presented. And I really liked how he still loves her, but recognizes the feelings have faded and changed. He cherishes them, but misses the memory of them.

Very beautiful!

I really liked this, and I think it was a perfect testimony to first loves. Congrats on a great oneshot!

that's so beautiful - but so sad, because i loved teddyxvictoire :)
*hugs* -likes this line- Victoire is feelings fading into gray
love, anie.

AMAZING! I LOVED this, this is my exact feelings on first love & schoolday romances! "alas, real/Life is no fairy/Tale, knows no ideal." SO TRUE! I once wrote a (horrible) poem called Ideal, and it was how life could be ideal...but it isn't! But this poem was a million times truer and better. "an eternal scar/which doesn't hurt" and "Victory's finding happiness without Victoire" were SUCH beautiful lines! It does make sense, Gaby, it does!! "First love means first loss, and needs no reasons" was true, amazing, and fantastic! I LOVED this poem--the disconnected lines, starting and ending in the middle of sentences--it was all fantastic!! Congrats on writing a fantastic poem!!

This is lovely, Gaby. I especially like "Loves Her still at present Tense."

Wow, this was awesome. I mean, awesome. I just loved the way it flowed, and the lines like 'Victoire is feelings fading into gray' and 'First love means first loss, and needs no reasons'. Loved it! =]

Yay for Teddy and Victoire NOT ending up together! I loved the line 'Victory’s finding happiness without Victoire' and how first love means first loss. Great job!

I really like this. I like the way you took that line and transformed it into a poem, something I don't thinkI've ever seen done before on Teddy and Victoire. You've caught the pain and joy of remembering your first love. The last line with them choosing different paths was amazing. Great job here! :)

-honda