I really liked this. It really made me tense and then laugh. Great combination and very similar to the real books.

This was creepy yet made me smile with the banter between the brothers. I also loved how Cal's biggest fear is losing Nico, and how neither of them can make the promise the other wants because they'll do anything to protect one another..

Great job :)

As I said on Tumulus, I really love this story. Everything about it, even the title. It's all great stuff, and I think you conveyed the emotions perfectly.

this was a really good little piece. I liked the darkness of Cal, and the brotherly moment - even if it was a little gross lol. Nice job. :)