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| Laughing 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseAs I said on Tumulus, I really love this story. Everything about it, even the title. It's all great stuff, and I think you conveyed the emotions perfectly. |
| ames 449 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abusethis was a really good little piece. I liked the darkness of Cal, and the brotherly moment - even if it was a little gross lol. Nice job. :) |