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| darthdrew1704 2008-08-18 ch 5,  | abusedude this is getting quite good i do hope you update again soon, darth |
| Fallen-Ryu 2008-08-14 ch 5, | abusenice...anyway looking forward to them finding kakorate...later! |
| blueyblonde 2008-08-01 ch 5, | abusei love it |
| PrideIsArrogance 2008-07-27 ch 5, | abuseConcern: Comma placement and paragraph structure. At times, spelling becomes an extreme. Good job, anyway. |
| Derra 2008-07-26 ch 5, | abuseGood fight you put there, keep this up it's really interesting. |
| The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule 2008-07-25 ch 5, | abuseI really enjoyed seeing Raditz beat the crud out of Frieza, I think that was very well written. |
| KidGoku13 2008-07-25 ch 5, | abuseYeah, that WOULD push lil Raditz over the edge, wouldn't it? Another awesome chapter!! Hurry, Fasha, HURRY! Gagawop Wuvs Yu! -Kid Goku 13 PS:Raditz is awesome in this! What a lil tough guy!! :P |
| Knight25 2008-07-25 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter. Continue soon. |
| PrideIsArrogance 2008-07-25 ch 4, | abuseAwesome job. When is the story going to end? |
| The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abuseI wasn't expecting Raditz to show up! I can't wait to see how the battle with Frieza goes! |
| Angel Saiyan 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abuseFrieza's gonna get it and bad too. I can't wait for more! :D |
| KidGoku13 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abuseO.O OMG YES! Now, Frieza, it appears the end has come for you! BWAHAHAHAAHAHAHAA!! Witness the power of a FAMILY of Super Saiyans! XD Such suspense...keep it up! Gagawop Wuvs Yu! -Kid Goku 13 |
| Derra 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abuseGood, this's really interesting. I like ssj Raditz, but what's he doing there? He was suposed to be away from Vegita-sey when the planet was blown to ases. |
| Knight25 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter. Continue. |
| Derra 2008-07-24 ch 3, | abuseFasha rocks, I didn't know she had violet eyes but that ssj tranformation was great, and she killed Dodoria ^^ (I don't like him a bit) Frieza is exitting his spaceship and Zarbon is more powerful than Bardock thoug... I wonder what's going to happen next. |