Great story! cant wait to read more!

i think the story is great so far

I love this story line. It's so nice to see our favorite super heroines facing real life issues. I know that I'd personally like to see Rini still come to be. I think it would kinda be sad if she didn't, I've always had a soft spot for he, lol. But it's up to you how you write it. And also, I really wanna know why Darien left her this time. He never did get back to Andrew on that one I've noticed. If you need an idea or anything, maybe you could have them run into each other again and have the argument escalate and have him tell her what his reason was. And then have her finally know what happened, and then base her response to that on where you plan to take the story to end it. I can think of so many potential paths. I don't know if you're still looking for suggestions or not, but the storyline for this is so rich that there are so many places you could still take this before the end. If you're still looking for ideas, let me know and I'll gladly help you out if you'd like. But as it's your story, the decisions are yours and yours alone to make. And they have all been great, believe me. I can't wait to see how it ends.

go for more!

:o i loved your story from your point of view please update soon!
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that was class i really want to know what darien was going to tell andrew! Please update!

Well I like it. It's interesting and this twist with Rini is also interesting. Of course, if Rini is still available to go back in time, then that means that Serena will get back with Darien (which we already knew anyway). I think you should get the girls to beat Darien up. Maybe with Rini there too. Darien doesn't need the easy way out. I hope that Setsuna gives him a whammy and shows him what his actions did to Serena after he broke up. I'm also curious as to why he did break up with her...another woman?

am loving this chapter. with Rini there i think Serena won't go back to the way she was acting before.

Rini is here to save her parents right?? Excellent work!

THis story is Fantastic. I love it cant wait to see what Dariens secret is.

Excellent update!

This is excellent, I really love the struggle between these two. Great work!

this was a great chapter but i really want to know what made Darien go?

I really liked this chapter and love a protective Andrew. I'm really curious to why darien decided to stay. Update again soon please.

Just found this and I'm loving it. The idea of DArien jumping Andrew for dating Serena is a nice touch!