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| Page-Mistress 2008-09-29 ch 2, | abuseMeanie! I wanna see! |
| Masaichu 2008-09-29 ch 2, | abuseAw...What a shame. I was really looking forward to this story. The plot is good and you wrote the first chapter very well. I hope that others feel the same. This story has potential! |
| De-Ji 2008-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sniffle* no second chappy yet.. :D write soon pls! I want to see Luffy's plan! ^^ you're a very good writer! |
| Emmy Scribe Protra 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI really don't think Sanji would make Usopp starve. That threw me right out of the fic. Also, to me, Usopp is very much cheerful in the face of being negative and depressed. Wouldn't he gloss over and lie about it if he felt unloved? How did Kaya get there or is that going to be explained in a later chapter? |
| XxStrawberryKittyxX 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseHi! Nice chapter. I can hardly ever find UsoppxKaya fanfictions. This one is good too! I'm looking forward to an update. Just a warning though, if there's a lemon I won't read it. There's nothing wrong with you writing one, but I don't read them. I liked this chapter. Hee, that was funny how Usopp sent a silent warning to Chopper. Kaya probably would have been upset if the reindeer had sweared. XxStrawberryKittyxX |
| Masaichu 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI love this story so far! I hope you continue you it very soon! Also, I hope you contine your story "Recovery of the Violated" in the near future. You're stories are all very good!! |