It was a good read. It would be nice to see a continuation of the story and see how their relationship develops.

great story!

oh,WOW WOW! That was nice!Liked EVERYTHING in keep writing more of this stuff, and call me, I want to read it!Ill be .Loved it, you write so well!

Very Nice story! Its was sweet!

Nice

That was very good. You had good interaction going on.

Good story :) love harper! More please

Oh, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! This is a great story. Can Trance really do that or is that a ficker (fan fiction writer) liberty? Mmm, good.

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This was really really good! I'd love to see more! ... SEW

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That was brilliant! Keep writing, I could imagine what you were writing, you drew me in, that is a talent, well done.

Oooh, I like. Write more T/H stuff, please?

I thought this summed it up nicely, a sonnet by Shakespeare.

My tongue-tied Muse in manners holds her still,

While comments of your praise richly compiled,

Reserve thy character with golden quill,

And precious phrase by all the Muses filed.

I think good thoughts, whilst others write good words,

And like unlettered clerk still cry 'Amen'

To every hymn that able spirit affords,

In polished form of well-refined pen.

Hearing you praised, I say ''tis so, 'tis true,'

And to the most of praise add something more;

But that is in my thought, whose love to you,

Though words come hindmost, holds his rank before.

Then others, for the breath of words respect,

Me for my dumb thoughts, speaking in effect.

Really good. I'm a huge fan of the Trance Harper relationship friendship or more and your fic was really good.

This story was write more I can't wait to read more