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Underneath All Elsewhere
2008-08-28
ch 10,
abuseOkay, I now officially LOVE this story! Sorry, if I sound a like a fangirl. But I just can't get enough of it. This chapter was filled with Spinner/Ellie action and I just adored it! I also like how you have been giving hints to the triangle steadily, and not just throwing everything out there. It's great.

Poor Alex. This takes me back to the days when she was all tough and badass, before Paige. Ugh. Anways, that does suck about the DUI, but maybe Spinner and Ellie can help? And not just for the (anti) Christmas spirit.

As for the triangle, I have a few ideas. I'm sure you probably have at least the next few chapters written if you're not writing it as you go along. I predict that Ellie might get jealous and slightly angry after Spinner goes to hang out with Manny. Then, she might realize she has feelings for him after he comes home, through a shouting match. Maybe she'll threaten to kick him out if he doesn't stop seeing her, and then he'll leave in a fit of rage, only to return two or three days later telling her he needs her. Then maybe there could be another party where he sort of uses Ellie to make Manny a little jealous. Then maybe he and Ellie could actually give it a shot, but then realize it'd be best to remain friends. Who ends up with who is up to you, but I am definitely not a huge fan of Manny, so I'd love to see it end with Spinner and Ellie, even if it's only through friendship. She's already had her heart broken one too many times.

Update soon!
138820
2008-08-27
ch 10,
abusethis is going pretty good, i think spinner should be with ellie! this is a really good idea u got goin there.
raindrop66
2008-08-27
ch 10,
abuseHm, I liked this chapter, though it really lacked any Marco-ness I was still awesome. :D
I especially like the idea of them all spending Xmas together. :]]
I think the Ellie and Spin thing would go together famously. It's an extra bonus that they already live together! As for Manny... I hate her with a horrible passion, but she doesn't seem too evil in this. :]] But I was never a fan of "Spanny".
One thing I would love to see is Alex with somebody. She just seems to have hit another crisis point, and she deserves something to keep her going... OR maybe you could have her turn herself in! :O Hm. Have something interesting happen with Alex, that hasn't happened yet. :D
And maybe Ellie should have a relapse or something... Ooh, that would be v v interesting.

:D Hope you like my (Uber) long review and my suggestions.
Even if you don't use any of my ideas I appreciate being able to tell you my thoughts and oppinions. :]] Keep writing!

.x...x.
Brooks's-Babey
2008-08-27
ch 10,
abuseWoo good chapter. Very festive, but the dramatic, gripping kind of festive. Nice one!
Marina
2008-08-27
ch 10, anon.
abuseOoh. I liked this chapter, but it seemed really short.

Hmm... Ellie vs. Manny, but this time with a twist: it's over Spinner, not Craig. Haha. My two fav characters but I have to go with Ellie. Spinner and Ellie seem so much better together.
Haley's Comet
2008-08-27
ch 10,
abuseI liked this chapter! I think you've been doing a really good job with making the characters believable. Keep writing. If you couldn't tell by the bluntness of that statement, it's not a request but I demand. =]
Haley's Comet
2008-08-21
ch 9,
abuseNice chap =]
update soon?
No Tonic
2008-08-21
ch 9,
abuseOh man, that Marco part was a bit hard to read. I've had friends do almost the exact same, it's not a pretty sight. Great update as always.
Underneath All Elsewhere
2008-08-21
ch 9,
abuseI liked the opening scene. I had to scrap the Manny/Ellie interaction from season five, and this short conversation in the bathroom of a pizza joint was enough for me.

Ellie just trying to maintain some sanity and Alex with her biting remarks just makes me miss the good old days of Degrassi.
Poor Marco. He's really falling apart. I could literally picture him singing though. And now he wants Alex to sing? This is starting to remind me of the episode where Spinner, Paige and Ashley ditched. lol

Update soon!
divisionminuscula5
2008-08-20
ch 9,
abuseawesome chapter
cant wait tosee what happens with spin and ellie
update soon!
Haley's Comet
2008-08-18
ch 8,
abuseI'm really liking this story, so please update soon. There isn't nearly enough Spinner/Ellie stories. I love them. =]
Underneath All Elsewhere
2008-08-17
ch 8,
abuseI found myself laughing every minute or so while reading this. The beginning with Spinner and Ellie getting used to each other was a nice way to start off the chapter. I thought it was funny how they were watching Project Runway. I think it's a pretty ridiculous show, too. When Marco and Alex came, I expected them to just sit around at the apartment, but Alex's idea was even better.

From karaoke night, to Spinner and Marco heart broken, to Alex trying to lighten the mood, to Ellie getting pissed off, I just couldn't stop laughing. Alex's last comment, the icing on the cake!

Spinner drunk and in a confused state? The DUI's definitely around the corner. Can't wait for the next installment!
RejoiceItsSusan
2008-08-16
ch 8,
abuseYou do a really great job getting the characters voices right
Brooks's-Babey
2008-08-16
ch 8,
abuseNice chapter. Looking forward to the Christmas Day storyline.

I thought u had both Alex and Spinner's characteristics and dialogue absolutely perfect in this chapter. Good job!

Well done! Brooks's-Babey
divisionminuscula5
2008-08-13
ch 7,
abuseaww sweet ending
update soon!
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