Not bad at all! I usually think fanfics where they suddenly confess their feelings and kiss are a bit too rushed, but this was done well enough that it didn't leave me thinking "Wait, what? How did that happen?" Very kawaii.

It was sweet and charming, not to mention hilarious and romantic. It had all these themes to it and I loved it! It was interesting; instead of his ears you made Kagome go for his hair. That was different from the others I've read where his ears were mainly focused on and I absolutely loved this one! Romantic and so Kawaii!

This is very good.

such a cute story...good job for your first fiction

omg..xDD it was so damn cute..

I want to be kagome, too.. I wanna touch his hair..XD

I liked it very much..;)

That was so sweet! And I love the part at the end! That was funny! Good job, LES!

-Fanatic

Wow nice story ;D Liked it.

OK, I love how you described his hair. I for one do have a hair fetish. I love when someone plays with my hair and I love to play with other people's hair (growing up in the 80's, what can I say). Anywho, great ficlet. Very sweet and romantic and extremely well written. :3

that was the sweetest story ever

Kagome does love Inuyasha as he is

I BET HIS HAIR FEELS LIKE LIQUID SILVER AND THE SOFTEST SILK!

aw... I loved it! I liked how InuYasha opened up about his life, talking to Kagome and explaining to her about what it was like for him back then. It was cute and sad at the same time... I loved it! Thanks!

Hee Hee that was great! Now I want to touch his hair... I think I am going to go pet my puppy now.

Aw, so cute. Awesome job!

-D101

Great story! I find it cool how you described Inuyasha';s relationship with his mother, Kikyo, and up the good work!