I love, love, love this story but there's one little thing that keeps bothering me. Kaeru keeps saying things like "How could you do this to my sister" even though she is long gone. i think its normal for Hotsuma to have moved on.

ah dont take it as an insult tho. its meant as constructive criticism.

Wow, finally the new chapter is up, thank you! But I don't get it, that Tenchi - apart from the fight with Hotsuma - remained so calm by the fact, that Ryoko is pregnant from somebody else. But please keep it up!

Uh oh! I can just feel the explosions.

Whoa, this story gets better and better. I'm curious how Tenchi reacts? I think he'll beat the living daylight out of Hotsuma Poor Ryoko... Keep it up, great work!

omg too short..cant wait for the update

OMFG poor tenchi :(

Poor Ryoko.

Ayeka don't just be silent talk back to that betch! God I hate Sakuya.

Very interesting take on the story/characters indeed. Keep goin' ;)

Very nice story, I love it! You're a good fanfic-writer, please write some more, I want to know what's happening next!

I think this story is true to the characters, they seem just like the ones in the show, that was refreshing. I have not been able to see any Tenchi in a long time and this was my first fanfic to read about it. Hopes for more on this story.

Nice story. I will be awaiting the next chapter.

omg i love this story! plz plz continue!

I love this fan-fic!

I love how you had some parts from the OVA and universe along with Tokyo, of course...

XD

Ep, keep it up! 8D

tenchi is so out of character i liked this story but the last 2 chapters don't really make me want to keep reading, but this is probably because i am a tenchi/ryoko fan