How old were E and B towards the end/last paragraph? : ) I loved the story,
and the relationships you showed from chapter 1, until chapter 22!

Oh my god, I love you guys :)
That story was amazing, you are both amazing writers.
Maybe you could try to write professionaly as a couple.
Wow.

I absolutely loved the story. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent. Keep up the good work, you are a great author. I will keep my eye open for your other works.

I loved this story. Couldn't stop reading it once I started.

real cute. liked the ending.

LOVED IT...

i luv it!

Interesting story...not a big fan of Libby. She kinda reminds me of that kid from Jerry Maguire movie...but he was cute at least.

I absolutely loved this story! There have been many AH Twilight stories out there, but this one had me hooked from the get go. Now I am off to look you up and read some more, thanks and keep up the awesome work

i love it

SEQUEL SEQUEL!
I CRIED AGAIN!
IT WAS BEATIFUL!
I'm gonna read it again and again and again!

HOLY CRAP U GUYS! SCARE ME MUCH! I WAS FREAKING CRYING!
NICE STORY!
NOW I'm gonna go read chapter 22.

Good story. You made me laugh and cry through out.

Great story guys!

I read the whole thing in one sitting, and the further I got, the more I enjoyed your banter at the beginning of each chapter -- later on I wasn't even reading the story so much as just looking forward to a good laugh caused by you two!

I think the plot (Bella = movie star, Edward = body guard/single dad) was one of the most original ones I've read so far. It was a wonderful journey, even the angsty parts were great! (and I don't like angsty, so that says a lot - I had to smile at one of the reviews where someone said, "She's pulling a new moon". Only a Twilighter could EVER make sense of that sentence, LOL!)

Not to mention how amazing you guys wrote little Libby - does any of you two have exposure to small children? I honestly did a double take when I realized the person who is writing those amazing, sweet scenes between Libby and her daddy is a 19 year old boy. Wow, hats off to you! I have never been that impressed in my life. (Please don't be offended, it's just that I don't know of a single 19 yr old boy who could ever pull that off...) And I really liked your Jacob - I never liked how pushy he is in the books so you toned it down nicely :)

Thanks for the great ride!