|Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart|
| EdwardsKitten 7/19/08 . chapter 1
Wonderful, fantastic, superb, stupendous, phenomenal! Gimme more. It's brilliant to have you both write the different prospectives. It makes the story so much more tangible.
| Jayeliwood 7/19/08 . chapter 1
I think this is an interesting start and I think he writes his part very well! Good job!
| Elliot 7/19/08 . chapter 1
OME that's so AWESOME! *swoons* I already love all the characters (excluding Devin Steal *lol*...but somehow, he's already grown on me...any chance we might see the "Diva" again?)
Oh, and don't you dare killing somebody of...almost had a heartatack with Liam "looking like death" *laughs*
So, I love it! Gimme more! *begs*
| padfootly 7/19/08 . chapter 1
Ish good so far. :)
| pebbs7286 7/19/08 . chapter 1
Ashel, I'm totally loving this new story. Don't know how I feel about Edward having a little girl and all yet, but I'm excited to see how that comes together. Also, I went to check out your husband's page. He's from my state, woohoo! Go buckeyes!
| Draco Owns All 7/19/08 . chapter 1
hello ashel-13 & hubby. im up for another 1 of my late night reading sessions. i like the idea for this story. very nice.
| TwilightSagaLover543 7/19/08 . chapter 1
OMG OMG OMG OMG! THIS IS AWESOME!
PLEASE I WANT MORE!
| isacz 7/19/08 . chapter 1
omg i'm totally looking forwardd to reading more of this story! great job! I LOVE it! :);):)
| forbiddenfruit18 7/19/08 . chapter 1
I love it...I think this is going to be another great story, and I think its so cute that you and hayden are co-writing this story together...keep it up
| Girlz-Rule 7/19/08 . chapter 1
sounds good so far, update soon:D
| dallasmeetsjersey 7/19/08 . chapter 1
oh i love it!
| Twilighter-101 7/19/08 . chapter 1
OMG! Great Story So Far!
| Enigma1918 7/18/08 . chapter 1
I have to say that a story like this one will never disappoint me! I think that Edward's POV was well written!
| hoopy-frood-42 7/18/08 . chapter 1
So, I have been sitting here for about 10 minutes trying to think of something intelligent and fancy sounding to write, but this is all I got:
Terribly sorry about that. But seriously, WO! GREAT FIRST CHAPTER! I AM STORY ALERTING THIS RIGHT NOW!
| Prpurpledragon 7/18/08 . chapter 1
As always you have a great story. The fact that you and your love are writing this together is so AWESOME. Your stories never disapoint. I really love how he wrote Edward. Not that you didn't write him As always my daughter (Jexena) and I are reading it. Can't wait to read more and definately can't wait for Bella and Edward to get together so their can be some DTE moments. ;)