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| Still Bullet 2008-09-01 ch 17,  | abuseWow, I found this to be a really interesting chapter :O All those twists were just...holy crap. Some interesting plot bunnies going around in your head, eh? XD;; Anyway, I thought that this chapter was excellent. A few errors, but nothing major. And wow, G-Man's freakin' me out here. Poor dear ol' Barney needs a break from all of this action :O So, I read your profile, and I would totally love to see this be continued! Episode One was my favorite of the series, so I'm really interested to see your version of it through Barney's eyes. Nice job, as always :D |
| Gir Crazy 2008-08-31 ch 17, | abuseOMGzez, G-man, you is crazy!O_0 Cool chapter man. I know you're probably sick of me saying this, but I can't wait for more!=^^= ~Gir Crazy ;3 |
| holywarrior 2008-08-30 ch 17, | abuseYay the update, good work on the chapter, keep it up! |
| Still Bullet 2008-08-17 ch 16, | abuseHoly hell, do you update fast! Wow, that was amazing! I thought that each chapter was very well done; you provided both a nice amount of action and other things, and the characterization is excellent! This story is shaping out to be one of my favorites! Very well done! Excellent :D |
| holywarrior 2008-08-16 ch 16, | abuseHm no wonder that tunnel was riddled with zombies, the Combine didn't want any visitors...Anyway great chapter. |
| Ninja of The Hidden Fridge 2008-08-13 ch 15, | abuseWrite more and the thing your having a problem was weird. But I think Lamarr teleported when Lamarr did, Except Lamarr appeared at Doc's lab. That's my guess |
| solid man 2008-08-12 ch 15, | abusehmm, a challenge... i say when the teleport works again, after the somewhat failed attempt to bring gordon and alyx back, it instead gets redirected to the desert where lamarr is.he sees the portal, and abandoning his attempt to eat a corpse, jumps in, and needless to say, kleiner is amazed, while barney is simply feels...well, facepalm. GOOD CHAPTER |
| Gir Crazy 2008-08-11 ch 15, | abuseGreat chapter! Poor rebel.:( Again, Lamarr is a girl. I don't know. Maybe she eventually found her way back to the lab. Maybe Kleiner got a new headcrab, and no one noticed. Video game flaws like that are funny.XD Can't wait for the next chapter! ~Gir Crazy ;3 |
| Gir Crazy 2008-08-11 ch 14, | abuseSorry again for missing a chapter. I haven't been on the computer much. Go USA! Great chapter. I can't wait for more. I guess it's a good thing I don't have to then.XD ~Gir Crazy ;3 |
| holywarrior 2008-08-11 ch 15, | abuseWow creepy chapter. Wonder what that surprise is? Update soon! |
| holywarrior 2008-08-11 ch 14, | abuseAw, another cliffy. Anyway this is a great story! Update soon! |
| solid man 2008-08-11 ch 14, | abuseim oretty sure it's 12 now, but china's got 15 DX. ah, well, good story though. |
| solid man 2008-08-10 ch 13, | abusesatisfying, but not nessecarily a stand out. seemed a bit normal, but hey, you're not done yet. |
| Gir Crazy 2008-08-09 ch 13, | abuselol, breaded Lamarr.XD Hilarious. Great chapter. Oh, and I forgot to mention this in the last chapter, but did you read the part about Griggs and Shekly's names somewhere, or did you make it up yourself? Also, isn't Grigori the name of the preacher in Ravenholm? I love Griggs and Sheckly.XD Glad you put them in that small part. Stupid G-man, ruining people's lives.DX I can't wait for more! ~Gir Crazy ;3 |
| Gir Crazy 2008-08-09 ch 12, | abuseOH MY GOD, IT'S G-MAN! Sorry for missing this chapter before you updated. Let's get on with this review and pretend that I didn't. This is one of my fav chapters so far. Now, I'm going to go read the next chapter. ~Gir Crazy ;3 |