You have to write more of these! These little stories between Archer and T'Pol, little slices of their friendship with the friction and frustration still there. I never got to see the episode you're talking about here but I can imagine what it was like down there between them now. I loved it! Just like I loved 'Making Faces'. Please, you have to write more between this brilliant couple as friends.

Hmm...I like it, even if it wasnt a romance, but it was very good, well written. Liked it a lot!

Very well done and very IC. It could have happened

All you writers are so talented, every last one! That was such a cute story :)

I really enjoyed your story. One of the many problems I had with this episode was that Archer never stopped to consider the possible reprecussions for T'Pol. I liked the way you handled the issue in this story. Jannie

you definetly got T'Pol's character in her last statement!

I hope the format doesn't look as crappy as it seems. Sorry if there was any anticipation over this story, given all the "Where the hell is the story!" reviews. Anyway, try to enjoy it, even if it looks screwy.

May I make a suggestion? Double check the file and try uploading it again, It may have made an error or something. And it'll probobly do more than just waiting for to magically fix it, which probobly won't happen.

ok either I'm going blind or this is written in invisible ink ( wait that wouldn't work on a computer) ooooooookkkkkk then I'm off to the optomitrists ( I probably spelled that wrong)

Oh, I get it, Archer contemplates nothing on T'Pol. Wait, I'm not making sense. WRITE SOMETHING!

The site is still upgrading. I promise, I wrote a story! Haha. Just give it time.

there's nothing there

write something