 Telaka 2004-04-15 . chapter 1You have to write more of these! These little stories between Archer and T'Pol, little slices of their friendship with the friction and frustration still there. I never got to see the episode you're talking about here but I can imagine what it was like down there between them now. I loved it! Just like I loved 'Making Faces'. Please, you have to write more between this brilliant couple as friends. |
 RitzBitz 2003-01-05 . chapter 1Hmm...I like it, even if it wasnt a romance, but it was very good, well written. Liked it a lot! |
 James Birdsong 2001-11-17 . chapter 1 Very well done and very IC. It could have happened |
 aylaa 2001-11-12 . chapter 1All you writers are so talented, every last one! That was such a cute story :) |
 luna524 2001-11-10 . chapter 1 I really enjoyed your story. One of the many problems I had with this episode was that Archer never stopped to consider the possible reprecussions for T'Pol. I liked the way you handled the issue in this story. Jannie |
 sitashi 2001-11-10 . chapter 1 you definetly got T'Pol's character in her last statement! ^^ |
 superninja 2001-11-09 . chapter 1I hope the format doesn't look as crappy as it seems. Sorry if there was any anticipation over this story, given all the "Where the hell is the story!!!" reviews. Anyway, try to enjoy it, even if it looks screwy. |
 Ms. Spooky 2001-11-04 . chapter 1 May I make a suggestion? Double check the file and try uploading it again, It may have made an error or something. And it'll probobly do more than just waiting for fanfiction.net to magically fix it, which probobly won't happen. |
 Aria Moonsword 2001-11-03 . chapter 1 ok either I'm going blind or this is written in invisible ink ( wait that wouldn't work on a computer) ooooooookkkkkk then I'm off to the optomitrists ( I probably spelled that wrong) |
 princesstulip 2001-11-03 . chapter 1Oh, I get it, Archer contemplates nothing on T'Pol. Wait, I'm not making sense. WRITE SOMETHING!!!!! |
 superninja 2001-11-03 . chapter 1 The site is still upgrading. I promise, I wrote a story! Haha. Just give it time. |
 a reader 2001-11-03 . chapter 1 there's nothing there |
 laylee 2001-11-02 . chapter 1 write something |