Hey,

just wanted to drop you a line seeing as I haven't done that in a while (haha, as if you missed me haha). Mostly, I wanted to let you know that no one (well I don't) wants you to feel pressurised into writing something, it's totally muse based and up to you and we'll understand, so no worries. :) Get back to it whenever you feel up to it. It's all good.

Supportively,
-Yuki.

Aw, really? That's a shame. But you gotta do what you gotta do, and there's no point writing a story if you aren't enjoying the process at all. Good luck on your other stuff.

Hey there, I gotta say, that was brilliant ^^ Nice work. You keep the mentioned characters near enough in character as dictated by the game. As a fan of the game, I think you've got a good perspective on how they'd act after the death of Teepo, and Rei's thoughts on whether it was a "one night stand" or not was great XD Good job. Keep it up, I'm sure that the other readers are look forward to the next installment as much as I am.

-Yuki.

Honey's so cute, isn't she? I wonder why she wanted to lead Momo down there though...?

Haha, Teepo has a daughter! Is that why you wanted ten years to pass, so so she would be old enough for this story? I'm quite curious as to who the mother is...

Unless it's Myria! *Cracks up* He certainly seemed to have an... ahem, friendly relationship with her, Though that would be a little weird, as she likes to think of herself as Teepo and Ryu's mother. Tee hee...!

Haha, poor old Ryu. I bet that must have been a real shock for him. Teepo with boobs, eh? You know, I bet someone has already drawn a fanart like that! Great work!

Short but good. I can't think of much else to say really, but the plot's looking promising.

Ooh, what an angsty Ryu we have on our hands here. I thought he was depressed at first because of the whole defeating Myria, therefore destroying the world with improaching desert thing, then I remembered Teepo. He's got a lot to feel guilty for, eh?

I'm likin' the plot so far, though I'm gonna have to say I agree with Bill about the Nina thing. Obviously her mother is a crazily controlling person, and the idea of her not letting her leave the castle easily is quite understandable. However, I think Nina having to go to the bathroom with an armed guard is perhaps just a little over the top. Perhaps a little toning down is needed?

But anyway, yup. It's interesting so far, so I'm gonna head off to the next chapter. :)

I'm glad to see you've started to write this again. Better yet improving it.

Eh...I got not real criticisms.

Eight years is a LONG time skip, two long I think, even in the modern world most people would have gotten married at that point let alone a princess in a fantasy setting. So many years under house arrest is rather hard to buy into as well. I'd shorten it down to no more then five.