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Reviews for: Link's Unlucky Day
terra de chocobo
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
That was really great and funny! I agree with Link, Tingle is terrifying. Keep it up :)
thitewiger
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
Wow! I loved this!
I'm more into the MarthxLink pairing, but I think this is winning me over.
Great job. You're my hero. :D
Stephanie
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
This definitely deserves more reviews... one of the cutest SSB fics I've read for a while! The characters are so well fleshed out, and even if some didn't take more than a minute of appearance, how you presented them was enough to portray part of their personalities (i.e scene with Master Hand). I felt so sorry for Link throughout yet can't help but find great, great amusement through his suffering :P His reactions are just so cute in here and he's just asking to be poked at. This is slowly converting me to ship Ike/Link. Such a pretty image. Thanks for the quality fic! Hope you produce more.
Midnight - Queen of Link x Pit
2008-07-19 . chapter 1
Oh my god, I loved this!

Link/Ike is so rare, and I love the pairing! :3

Nice work on this, I was laughing the whole time at poor Link.
Sachiko V
2008-07-19 . chapter 1
Hahahahah genius XD Everything was genius! From the unusual prompt of Friday the 13th to the on-the-spot characterization of everyone. Poor Link having to get away from the perverts (doesn't help he's an eyecandy). I enjoyed the great details of his misfortune and can see it so well in my head that I'm tempted to draw the scenes.

I laughed so hard at Link being superstitious, considering the insane amount of adventures in Hyrule dealing with mystics. What a fun irony XD Love your take at how different Toonie was from Link in personality, especially his vulgarity and earning Ganondorf's respect. That is really saying something. It would seem that Toonie would be bolder than Link since he's more childish. Also, I have to praise you for the possibility of a very angry, scary Pit since it contradicts his angel image.

Finally, I praise you for the choice of pairing, one that is so uncommon and one I found myself liking a lot. The ending was so hot, and the chemistry between the two swordsmen in here was perfect.

Sorry for the wordy-ness ^_^; Anyways, great job! Keep it up!
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