Aww, so sweet. A really good characterization of the love of Ryoma and Sakuno. <3
Keep writing.

..aw..



..sad...



..but touching..



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this is so sad >_<
I'm surprised to find that you write an angst fic
but it's really good ^^

wa...
you're so good in writing
i'm jealous=D

So angsty, and well-written. Good work!

~PT

hi i love the story pls... make a story about misty and ash

Nice story!

what? What happened? I don't understand... TT^TT

Wow! Neko11lover you're BACK! This was an awesome fic! It was so true and touching though. I liked the relation between the butterflies and the humans! Kawaii! Can't wait to read more!

i was actually thinking of starting a multi-chapter story somewhat like this, but i've been so busy lately. anyway, it was great, and i liked it a lot. i hope you cheer up, but while you are sad, writing does help let that out. A lot of good writing came out when people were feeling sad or emotional. I know from personal experience too, so hang in there. C:

lol at first my mouth dropped lyk an 'o'. lol but i love it xD it's beautiful n... it's so real.. it's lyk wht he was really thinking and i love it :D hope you'll write more and more cause im always waiting for your fics :D

NYA NYA NYA!! aw that was wonderful Seru-chan! but I'm unsure...did Sa-chan die? hehe sorry got confused! :D but the story was wonderful!! nya nya nya! to tell you honestly this is the first story I have read again...after my busy sched. ung Paris with love d ku na mababasa!! waah!! T^T..well i think I'll stop saying um...useless things? heheh

Very nice! Really like this!

Waah! So sad! WHY, WHY, OH WHY?

This was very good, though :))

Wow. Amazing little fic!
Was sad-ish, but beautiful.. :)

Great job, really liked it! ^_^