Reviews for Bittersweet Romance

Reviews For: Bittersweet Romance

LadyEmber 2008-09-01 ch 4,	abusethe chapter was good, can't wait for your plan to be ... revealed and who is Ryousai? i'm too lazy to go wiki XD and loove the suitcase!
L0stL0ve 2008-09-01 ch 4,	abuseNOO poor Toush. His woman lies, and is tainted. BO. Anyway great job! I love the previous fics too!
Nakigoe 2008-09-01 ch 4,	abusekeep updating plz!!
erina destiny 2008-08-31 ch 4,	abusei find myself liking the new mei better. Just don't let her go back to aizen whole-heartedly. And someone please kill yamamoto lol. update soon!
GrnEydDvl 2008-08-31 ch 4,	abuseOh, poor Toush, he's so blinded by love that he can't see the change. And it's just going to end up hurting him. And what the heck is Ryousai doing there?! What a jerk! Anyway, good job as always and I can't wait for the next one :)
erina destiny 2008-08-27 ch 3,	abuseAnd the funniest thing is that his voice actor is actually a female. Anyway i don't want a OC/Hitsu/Gin! As in, i don't want mei to love gin. haha Update soon (n thanks for that info update of the royal families)
Nakigoe 2008-08-27 ch 3,	abusei think Shusuke Amagai should make an apperance since he replaces Gin.
GrnEydDvl 2008-08-27 ch 3,	abuseHehe, Hitsugaya shirtless in front of Yamamoto, I loved that :) I feel bad for him though, he's so hurt that she didn't tell him. And how does she feel about Gin? hm? I loved the scene with Gin though, very well done! And thanks for the fast update!
erina destiny 2008-08-26 ch 2,	abuseArgh how i wish it was Hitsugaya... But how many royal families are there? I kindof forgot... where does that prince come from?
erina destiny 2008-08-26 ch 1,	abusei didn't know you have started on the 3rd story! But somehow i like the first chapter a lot. Maybe more the your previous 2 stories. I like the way that Mei has changed. But why is she still under Yamamoto? SO sad for her haha.
Nakigoe 2008-08-26 ch 1,	abusewow this is really great! ^^ keep going at it!
GrnEydDvl 2008-08-07 ch 2,	abuseA sad ending is fine if you really need to do it, but happy endings are always more enjoyable. Just because Mei has gone bad, doesn't mean things have to end tragically. Sure, she could break Hitsugaya's heart in the middle of the story, but just because she thinks being with Aizen was cool doesn't mean she's about to run off and join him. I think that would go against her personality, even her new one, she's too devoted to Soul Society. She liked being with Aizen, not because she enjoys death and destruction or wants to destroy Soul Society, but because of the power trip it gave her, because she was near the top of the pyramid and could boss people around at will (like that scene with Grimmjaw). But wait, ISN'T SHE THE BLOODY PRINCESS? She can boss people around all she wants. She wants to be strong and independent and powerful, and she is totally in a position to do that. But I think what would be better than a sad ending, or a cheesy one where Hitsugaya brings her back to normal (because I'll agree, that's trite and probably stupid) is one where he learns to live with her. He rises up to meet her, while she comes down off her high horse a little and they meet somewhere in the middle. You can do all your juicy heartbreak in the middle, but in the end, I think the story would be overall better if they just come to terms with each other as they are. At the end of the day, it's your story and I'll read it no matter what, so if you want to break Shiro-chan's heart in the end, then I guess you can. But I'm a sap at heart, as are many of the people on this site, and I think the story will be better received if things work out between them. A story where they each grow a little bit and learn from each other is better than a plain old boring romance anyway, and just because Mei is bad now and Hitsugaya is in love with the sweet, innocent girl she once was, doesn't mean that can't change. That's what character development is for, and that's where stories become wonderful. Ok, I need some water after talking so much, but I hope that was helpful (not that you need to listen to me, but you know). Good luck :)
GrnEydDvl 2008-07-20 ch 1,	abuseYay, you finally wrote the next part! Wow. Amazing! I think your writing has improved a lot (not that it wasn't great before, but this chapter somehow seemed more powerful). I loved Matsumoto's analysis of their relationship, it definitely made me laugh. I can't wait to hear what Ryousai has to say. Update soon please!
LadyEmber 2008-07-19 ch 1,	abuseThis new side to Mei is a bit... odd not meaning it isnt good i shall await the next chapter and yay for the Hitsu fluffyness!

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