a kiss? ohh he was bold lol i love tormenting leto i have my own stoies too but i havent posted them yet i loving this btw

fuck yea this is great this story has potental for yaoi! yay!

...Oh...my...God, that was freaking amazing! XD I love your take on this, I think it was really well done!

Hello.
I think you are a pretty good writer compared to alot of people here. You thought of pretty good dialouge.
I liked how you're insights into Legato's forming personality.
and...I'm sorry about the people who aren't specific in their reviews or people who flame you. It annoys me too. I hope this reivew wasn't vauge.
Please continue you're Legato story. I love Legato and you do him justice.

Very, very good. Especially liked how you portrayed Legato's loyalty to Knives. Reminded me of a dog who is blindly faithful to his master. A great story overall.

Good enough story so far, and this chapter was...interesting, but I have a few things to mention. First off, on the medical angle of this, attaching a limb isn't as simple as hacking off one and then just sticking another in its place. The tendons and (many) nerves would have to be connected somehow and the bone would at least have to be held together long enough for it to heal. Second, since Knives was a little incapacitated - to say the least - when Legato got the arm, he probably had a porfessional do the, er, job. Third, (I'm almost done here) I seriously doubt that Legato would become a masochist. For one thing, he'd probably see it as a 'human' weakness and for another, in the anime and manga he avoids pain just as much as anyone else does.

So, those are my thoughts about it, sorry it was so long. Other than what I mentioned, it's a great fic. Keep up the good writing.

- SetoRulez

Hmm, how to say? I liked it a lot. :-)

The third and fourth parts put in words some confused thoughts I had about Legato, but that I didn't managed to explain.

That was cool.

This is a really great story! It's well written, thorough and detailed. You know you've pulled a good'n if you get me to actually log in to review something. :o)

WAAIII! I love this story! Jeep writing, please! _ Muuuussst haaaavve moooorrreee _