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| Bitter Failure 2008-08-02 ch 1, | abuseNice to see someone care enough to fill in the gaping plot hole M+B left. This was nicely written. |
| fallinfast 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseHa ha nice job, very entertaining. Given the amount of time you had quite well done. Quotes would be nice i couldn't always tell who was talking. |
| Fantasyfan4ever 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseSpectacular job! I feel so bad for Zuko, but the girls were right. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this. |
| Scarlett Masquerade 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseIt was a good story, I really liked it. Are you continuing? Just one thing: quotations. When people talk you put quotation marks around it. I don't know if you were maybe doing that on purpose, but it was kinda bothering me. |