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Reviews For: Two's Company

Bitter Failure
2008-08-02
ch 1,
abuseNice to see someone care enough to fill in the gaping plot hole M+B left. This was nicely written.
fallinfast
2008-07-20
ch 1,
abuseHa ha nice job, very entertaining. Given the amount of time you had quite well done. Quotes would be nice i couldn't always tell who was talking.
Fantasyfan4ever
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abuseSpectacular job! I feel so bad for Zuko, but the girls were right. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this.
Scarlett Masquerade
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abuseIt was a good story, I really liked it. Are you continuing?

Just one thing: quotations. When people talk you put quotation marks around it. I don't know if you were maybe doing that on purpose, but it was kinda bothering me.
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