Psh, dude, this was awesome,funny..cool XDD

HEH. FAVORED!

A nice interesting pairing which complements the first person viewpoint but I found it bit hard to read but other than it was a great read

Nice! Love it! One of my favorite parings.

I been read alot of these Naruto and Tayuya romance oneshot stories and I think this pairing is like Minato and Kushina. That's what I think, this is the sixth story I,ve read on the pair it ranks in my top two. It's the truth. Rock out!

*laughs* very nice.

That was great, simply great. Only thing is you should look to see where you could break the first six paragraphs into smaller, easier to read paragraphs instead of drawn-out ones.

That was a bit strange, but very good. Keep writing, and check out some of my stories at the same time!

This fic is really great I would be greatful if you continued this fic but dont just just use one P.O.V. that would be great.

awesome. i like the ending

Nice,

“… Next time use a condom, you ** head…” I like that part especially

That was suitably random. I did like the jump from 'almost-friends' to parents though!

Nice one-shot

cool