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| RedCloakedMaiden 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseThis is a lovely piece of work, beautifully written. I see no flaws and I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Good Writing! |
| snowish 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseThis was interesting. I loved the way that it's written - the sentences flow so well! I pity Lea already. (Lea with that lovely little accent mark, that is.) Keep going! |
| snowish 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI like Mathilde. She's ironic. There's so much detail in here! I love. Keep up with it, because I want to know if Mathilde actually does get offed by her husband for the "mistress." f |