This story was good and sad but really really really good. I loved it. Funny how i read the sequel first before the story though but it's really good.

i really like your story so far. i was born with XP, and so was by brother. i was lucky, i still have limited sight, my brother is completely blind. even the glare from my moniter burns my skin so i have to have my big sister(who totally rocks:) read it to me. thanks, and i love the story and but think Carsilse should be more understaning towards edward. great story, love steph and isabelle

wow. what a great story.

a lot of bad things happened to them but they were still able to get through it all.

:D

thanks,kudos!

i'm nervous but intrigued!

hi, I'm your new rider. I'm from argentina so I don't know very well how to write in english. it's enlish or inglish? well i don't know.
about the preface, it looks good. sad but good. I hope you like happy endings.
I'll reed you later.
vampi

i love you, u hve a true talent. email me at

this is a nice story

LOVED IT!

So, I just read this again, and wanted to leave another review (I expect I've already reviewed this chapter, so didn't sign in) to tell you how wonderful, and how much I loved this story! Really, you're an awesome writer - and I'm still amazed that 10 people had this on alert!

it took me like, a week to read this, and it was completely worth it! you are an excellent writer and i plan on reading the sequel.

Great story! I've spent most of the day reading. I think it moved me to tears more times than any others I've read but thankfully still had a happy ending. I thought the non-lemons were great...giving the setting and emotions without excessive detail. I was surprised to see your age -- you write with the skill and maturity of someone several years older. You are very talented!

Can I ask why Bella’s eyes are blue? Aren’t they supposed to be chocolate brown? But anyway, GREAT story and I love it!

Really original storyline and i just love it.

This was such a wonderful story. It was so emotional. Heart breaking at times an heart warming at others. I love the fact that it seemed like you put a great amount of research into the medical conditions you covered ( people that don't research is a huge pet peeve of mine).

I don't want to sound rude, but I generally don't read stories written by teenagers, because sometimes they just aren't realistic and lack content and creativity. You are a huge exception to that rule. If I didn't know your age, I would have sworn that you were in your late 20s or early 30s with the content and complexity of your story.

I look forward to reading your future works. You have alot of talent and you really should major in English or Creative Writing when you go to college.

Take care!

:)