If not the best, one of the best I have EVER read! I loved it, unsure why it doesn't have thousands of reviews! Have to favorite it forever! Wonderful Job!

Beautiful story. I was like you, never even knowing what FanFiction was until one day while goggling about Dragon Ball Z I came across the term and my curious got the best of me... days later I started my own fiction... sadly at the rip age of 13 my grammer was horrid and I didn't know what a Beta was and after all my hard work over a year and a half of posting it got deleted... 10 years later I'm still getting demands to bring it back but I've moved and gotten married and many things have been lost over time. Great story and I'm glad you finished it!

Okay, so I never read stories that aren't marked as complete, so I've only just read this and I gobbled it down in about 5 hours. Your characterizations were spot-on, noting exactly how Snape could go from ... well, Snape to the adorably lovable Severus that we see in the end. I noticed very few typos or minor errors, and that's quite rare in this fandom, and even in this ship. You are to be commended for taking the time to put all these words to "paper" and putting it out here for us to love. Thank you for a brilliant story, and I wish you the best in your other literary endeavors.

OMG! I have to say; I simply loved it! I've read many a good story, but this was, by far, the best one yet. How on earth did you come up with such a plot? There is a part of me that embraces the ugly, green-eyed monster called both envy and jealousy and there's a part of me that wishes you had been part of JK's life enough for her to actually allowing you to publish it. I'd honestly buy a copy of it had it been released. I can only hope that my imagination will return to me so I can write a story that is only half as good as this one. Concider yourself one of my favourite authors. I'll definitely be looking out for more of your stories.
My deepest respect to you.
Lily xx

Excellent story!

This is a great story, and amazing from a new author! I will go back and do some chapter reviews, but I wanted to give an overall impression.

First, congratulations on achieving just the right length. You've told one story and told it really well. I find the best stories are often told in one or two chapters, but you have a longer, more complex work that you have kept corralled (for the most part - the Draco/Luna baby part of the epilogue could have been cut). Way to go!

It's also a powerful story, and the characters are so well written that they carry the story despite what I found the less-than-believable device that explains Snape's behavior: the unbreakable vow. That is, the vow makes his behavior consistent, but his reason for making it isn't that believable. But I didn't care that much.

I will look for you other works and follow you with interest.

That was an absolutely wonderful story - well done. You should be very proud of yourself!

this was the perfect ending! i loved it!

I have a sincere desire to tell you how captivating your story is. It is exquisite, and I am thankful that I was able to stumble upon it and fall in love with it. While there were parts where I hated you (How could you do such terrible things to Hermione?) I nonetheless could never tear myself away. The plot was fantastic, the writing superb (no matter how 'amateur' you believe yourself to be.)
Thank you for posting, it was a joy to read.

This story was a remarkable adventure. I loved reading it and it intensified my belief in love and the power it holds us in-- entrapped, enraptured, and wholly consumed. You craftsmanship on this story is beyond the norm--if you have any interest in real-life application of writing, I strongly suggest you pursue becoming an author. I am a harsh critic, and you have beyond surpassed my expectations. Well, done, love. You deserve a round of applause.

I loved this story. It was excellent, and you are a talented writer. I'm sure the more you write, the better you'll be though you're already one of the better ones I've read. :D You should write another one in the near future. Thanks for the awesome story. I enjoyed it.

I'm so glad I found this story. One of the best SS/HG I have read. I was really surprised by the way things turned out, and almost feel I should go back and re-read the lot!
Well done!

Excellent!

=) Ich nehm mal an, du bist in irgend einer Weise, der deutschen Sprache mächtig, ich hoffe also du verstehst mein Kommentar. Auf alle Fälle schreibst du sehr gut - und solltest du Deutscher sein, ganz hervoragend im Englischen.

Lass dir versichert sein - es ist eine sehr schöne Geschichte.
Regards
Dan

P.S.
Übrigens - "Arglist Industries"...*g* ... schönes Wortspiel!

I absolutely love this story and I have read this more than once!

I wish I had the talent and patient to write some wonderful stories. I'm afraid all I can do is draw and read these lovely stories when I can!

Keep it up.

Cheers!