Oh my gosh, I LOVED this!

Very nicely done. James is my favorite character (Jack of course running a close second) and it was not RIGHT for them to kill him off! I so wish this is the way it would have been done instead. I do hope you write more on this story, my interest was caught and held and would love to read more! Good job! :)

Although I still think that Elizabeth ends up with Will, I could see this happening. One of the worst things they did in AWE was to kill off Norrington, just when he was becoming such a neat character!

This was well written and very readable, and you make the whole scenario believable.

Nicely done!
Cheers!
Nytd

Aww...that was perfect.
That's how it should've been exactly.
I can't wait for your sequel, though I don't think I'd mind a sequel to this...there's still a lot of the movie to cover. I'd like to see how things go with James around.

Aww, that was so sweet!