You totally had me going! I thought the story was really funny and then was surprised when it was a dream! Cute story! :)

Great chapter, very funny. I didn't realize that it was a dream until Mac woke up. I can't believe that you had Mac and Dick being married and are going to have a baby. That's so great.

For some reasons, I feel like the sex scene is always the same: fooling around, reaching the climax and then the cuddling. May be you could have some very romantic sex scene: rose petals on floor up to the bedroom, Bedroom with candles and more rose bouquets, Champagne

Are you going to continue this ? you could have wedding, honeymoon in the Bahamas, buying first house, first disagreement which let to make up sex , when their daughter was conceived. These are some ideas. Feel free to use them

aww i love it it's so cute

that was so adorable!

Aw...; I like what you did with the end! It's so sweet and cute and funny! and I love it!

It's even better since he wasn't the one dreaming.

I love this.