Haha. Liked that, too. And E and J's famiarity with one another... Mm.

I think you capture them well. Bella's voice feels really authentic.

Good stuff :)

Great. I would love to hear more.

Ha ha ha. This is a pretty hot story. Loved it!

Pretty damned hot! Thanks.

Great story! You should continue!! Please!

What the HELL? You are mean, that was an awesome end!

I found this very cute and playful. Well done.

G-D can you spin a tale! I thinks me needs a cold shower!

hee hee hee! What a fun little romp. Very OOC, IMO, but very fun. I almost feel like clapping my hands in joy like a toddler. BTW, love the 3-some. Very nice.

Super hot chapter. Made me want to be in Bella's position. Literally!

(sigh) I love the B/E/J trifecta :) Thanks for another great fic!

Delicious fantasy! Do continue...

oh that was delicious

Whew! Hot stuff! I'm intrigued by just how familiar the boys were...

so good! i need to go take a cold shower now HAHA!