That kiss was just... It was... wow

omg that was fantastic ...she wrote twilight to her self! ! !
i just love the idea ! ! ! ! ! !
hehehe

very very clever! I really liked this.. short but very sweet. YOU MUST DO A SEQUEL! I really want to know how the cullens react to all of Bella being back and what Aro has up his sleeve! G

sequel please! Really like your Bella.

Superb, exciting, thrilling writing! I hope you choose to continue this story and make it a trilogy. Thanks for sharing it, and good luck with your original fiction endeavors :)

I love pure unrestricted vampire sex. Thats what we all wanted to read in BD. well done.

Is it wrong of me to like your Bella and Edward better than their "real" counterparts?
The pacing was exact, Bella's interloping sarcasm made her feel more, idk, authentic? And "teh smut" was GLORIOUS! I don't know which I want more - a raw steak or a vibrator!
The character development alone has completely transcended the Juvenile Fiction of the Twilight series. I feel so satisfied after reading this! I love the way the game of chess is carried thruout the story a la Wuthering Heights/ Romeo & Juliet, I love Bella's aversion to killing, and I especially loved that Carlisle thought Bella would perhaps be his favorite.
Your story arc was fabulous - perfect tension that allowed everyone to "be" themselves. Every character's voice was unique and worded in a way that deftly but subtlety added to their personality.
If I had started reading Spiral Static and Citizen Erased early in the morning, I would have called in sick to finish it. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing with us!

Liar, liar, pants on fire . . .although if Edward causes it, I guess that's okay!

Interesting. I like that your Edward is beautiful, but not instantly likable. Too often he gets handed to us on a platter with a big sign that says "Worship Me". I like this better.

OH! I haven't read your other story, as I found this one in the favorites list of a new fan fic friend, refolin. But I really like the first chapter! I think you handled the suspense well and are already building a very believable Bella.

looking forward to reading and reviewing

Okay. Yes, you had bloody well be writing a sequel to this! Leave us hanging on the edge of a cliff, why don't you?

Totally enjoyed this sequel and its predecessor!

Loved Snarky Bella in both fics.

And at some point, by God, Edward has to learn to communicate with Bella--actually make her his partner. AARGH.

One question: what in the hell does the "en prise" chess reference mean? I think that "en prise" means taken, right? I'm just not sure. Maybe I should just go Wiki that.

Anyway, thank you for sharing your talents with us humble readers! Keep on writing, chica!

Yep - lovely ! I will be putting you on alert & hope you decide to write that sequel.

Just found your fics today! Wonderful. Loving every chapter! Having Bella write the books as a journal was a very clever idea. And I did laugh at the original plane ride. can't wait to find out what happens next. It's always so exciting to find something so enthralling that's already completed.

Good story. I'm so impressed that you completed the original and the sequal, and both are so solid. So many stories are wonderful but they start wandering aimlessly about. Mikhail was a fascinating character, I wish you'd explored him a bit more, fleshed out those ultimate plans of his at the end.