See what alcohol does to ya? lol
Great chapter. Very well written!

Woah, I really like this story. It's very intense and you protray the Joker very well. Reading on!
Btw, thanks for adding my story - Twisted - to your story alert.

I think she's switching over to the Joker side a little too quickly. it just feels like there's not alot of detail being put into the transition from victum to accomplice.

Now that's got to be SO embarassing! He just walked off like that! Wow I feel bad for her! That's kinda funny though!

"..." Things are going pretty fast...

I like the way you discribed Lydia's attraction to The Joker so far. It's not obsessive and flirty, but then agian it's not so subtle that you'can't tell. Very nice balance!

yay

You see I really like Cold, Christina scabbia(lacuna coil), and Apocalyptica alot anyways, but when I saw the video for sos and heard the song, I pretty much ** myself. How ** amazing was that OMFG?! Even the video looks like the ** story, and like TDK, that was damn eerie and wonderful. Like the background is all dark just like the movie and when I saw some kind of torn papers in the air constantly falling, it TOTALLY reminded me of the joker cards in the movie. THAT WAS PHENOMENAL! The lyrics also go PERFECTLY with the entire story! I just love it when stuff like that happens...One of the most thrilling parts of the story for me yet! OMG...*I'm gonna go chill out now before I have an awesome seizure or something...yea...lmao*!

lil' bitty jokers? OMFG I LOL'D SO HARD! AHAHAHAAHAHXD

Another FF with the joker and an OC!? ** YES, OF COURSE!

Writers block? AHAHAHAHHAAH! I hope you were joking cause that “We are the true faces of evil.” ** was ** EPIC! No joke...

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So far the way youve portrayed the joker is...how do I put this...SIMPLY ** SUPERB! The intimacy in this chapter is A-MAZ-ING...it's awesome amd scares the ** out of me. Also...those last little tidbits were EPICWIN. Wow, I really love it when people make me Mindtripp lmao. thx

lol 'requested' an interview...thats hilarious.

OMG, that was written so well I could picture it perfectly in my head. The parts when he started going through her things...I just couldnt get over it. Even her dirty clothes too? It was so raw I loved it! Oh gawd and that song totally set the mood. lol ipods xp!